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Assortedclockwork — Lloyd is special like that
Published: 2011-03-20 23:51:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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This is a really quick sketch and the only reason it's not in scraps is because it's a comic. And I am intending to do a comic at some point, hence I want people's opinions/tips/etc if at all possible.WHY is Lloyd randomly football-tackling someone? See title. As for why it's *Flareblade2000 's Half-Life fancharacter Tom... I'm less sure. I was wandering through her gallery randomly and wondered what it would look like if Tom and Lloyd ever met.
Lloyd is not (normally) inherently violent, he just sort of... tends to accidentally hit things and people when he's having minor breakdowns.
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Like Setsu said, show the motion. Also, the shirt's neck length kept changing, it you notice. It procimity to the symbol is a good way to tell. The expressions were great, though. ^^ The panels get noticable smaller as it goes on, but I do like the flow of it. ^^
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OMGQUALITYCRITIQUE YES.
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._. What? You didn't think I could give a good one...
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No, I'm just happy because this is the HELPFUL kind of critique. And I was sort of braindead. Somebody cranked up the gravity over here and everywhere is warm and sleepy and cozy, you can't blame me.
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I can't give a bad kind of critque, I'm too nice!
XD Oh lord.
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Offering an advice even if I don't do the comic thing myself... I got a little confused in the third panel. It took a minute to figure out That was Lloyd and he'd just bunted O'Random McDudeguy out of the scene... Maybe some motion lines in the direction he's coming from? The fact his hair's blown to the side helps, but...
*making no sense as usual*
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Mmkay, that makes sense, yeah.
*doodles in some motion lines*
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It's a sanity meter!
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XD Yeah! I want to mess with it!
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*long silence*
That is... not very safe.
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._. I know. But, I'm a Ninja..I'll do it..in secret..
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I mean that's not very safe for Lloyd... and I don't know if you CAN mess with it. Ninja, the gears are in his brain, and I don't think they're supposed to go backwards.
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Oh. Then I'll just mess with his brain. XD
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