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Atticus-W — GoS Contest-- 'Monticello'

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Description The first train of the Pioneer Line was utility at its finest. A young fellow by the name of Isaiah Cartwright heard of the newly-opened Cumberland Line in 1827 and saw a fortune to be made... if only he had some carriages! Lacking a great deal of start-up money, he called upon his blacksmithing friend John Kultz and together they cobbled together a steam engine and all of the hardware needed to complete a railroad train (wheels, axles, leaf springs, coupler hooks, and etc.) for their newly-founded Pioneer Line Trans-Portation Company. Their finished product looked something like this:

The locomotive was what future generations of railroaders would call a “2-2-0” (Kultz figured the thing would stay on the track with its wheels arranged such) and boasted a lap-seem, marine-style boiler with fully contained firebox/ashpan and a single flue and smokestack (sans smokebox). A collection of firing tools was stored hanging from a festive, wood-framed canvas roof. No one gave much thought to naming the locomotive at this time (“Why would passengers care what we call the steam-engine??”— though in the near future the line would call its second, Norris-built locomotive “Explorer” ).

The locomotive was followed by a coal tender which consisted of a wooden box for coal and ashes (the boiler’s ashpan, being small, needed to be shoveled out even as coal was shoveled in) and a wooden water barrel, sitting on four wheels and a wooden frame. Behind the tender they coupled what they considered their most ingenious creation, a kitchen on wheels complete with a coal stove and a fully-stocked pantry and storeroom. They figured that meals on the go would be a big draw to get folks into their final carriage, a crude but sturdy 20-seater boasting little more than benches and a topside luggage rack (which proved rather more popular with passengers than it was ever intended to be— turns out that fresh air beats cramped conditions inside!). The coach was given the wishfully luxurious name of “Monticello” after Jefferson’s grand estate, and was often seen wearing formal bunting (these were patriotic times!).

The whole train was lit with a collection of barn lanterns, and big nautical lamps lit the tracks fore and aft. Her crew was Cartwright, Kultz, Wilma the cook (an old freed slave), and, generally-speaking, a porter/trainman or two. (And after only a few years in the business, Captain Cartwright and Engineer Kultz were running a first-rate, Norris-hauled operation complete with an eight-wheel passenger car on trucks! But that’s another story. )


(Engine sans sign/roof tarp: [link] )



(Now in case you’re wondering how I can enter a contest theme that I started, I figured it would work like this— entering a theme you started is fine, but if you should happen to win your own contest, the honor of choosing the next theme goes to the runner-up. That way, folks won’t have to deal with the same person’s crummy () themes twice in a row. ^^ Sound good?)
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Comments: 49

steam-dieselpunkpunk [2016-11-23 02:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Enginer worker: sir how are the people from the galley not to spill food onto the tracks.

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Atticus-W In reply to steam-dieselpunkpunk [2016-11-24 03:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Carefully, of course!  There is a relatively safe passageway between the galley and the passenger car, actually.  Each car has an end door and a railed end platform that faces the other car.

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steam-dieselpunkpunk In reply to Atticus-W [2016-12-10 01:22:58 +0000 UTC]

then they would have to not look down

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Eddie-Sand [2016-01-02 07:47:34 +0000 UTC]

6 years later:

 I just noticed the "Emergency brake", and couldn't stop laughing.

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Atticus-W In reply to Eddie-Sand [2016-01-02 20:20:10 +0000 UTC]

It's been that long...??  Hehehe.  Thanks, man.

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waltsland [2015-11-20 10:40:18 +0000 UTC]

hum the engine is similar to the Rocket!!!great work!!!

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Atticus-W In reply to waltsland [2015-12-06 15:43:27 +0000 UTC]

I hadn't thought of that per se, but I guess you have a point.  It's certainly meant to belong to that era, if not even a tad earlier.  Thank you! ^^

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waltsland In reply to Atticus-W [2015-12-18 18:21:27 +0000 UTC]

you welcome my friend!!!

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ThePainTrain765 [2015-05-21 20:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Is that an anchor instead of brakes?

I like your style. 

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Atticus-W In reply to ThePainTrain765 [2015-12-06 16:19:23 +0000 UTC]

It is-- thank you sir. ^^

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Rockyrailroad578 [2014-03-20 21:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Safety? Where we're riding, we don't need safety!

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Atticus-W In reply to Rockyrailroad578 [2014-03-23 19:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh come now, this line has been injury-free for almost a week and a half!

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Rockyrailroad578 [2014-02-09 02:28:34 +0000 UTC]

I think it is a believable train of the 1830's

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Atticus-W In reply to Rockyrailroad578 [2014-02-09 09:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I put a lot of thought into it. ^^

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stecdude123 [2013-12-20 13:53:55 +0000 UTC]

I never seen this engine before

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Atticus-W In reply to stecdude123 [2013-12-22 06:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's because I invented it.

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stecdude123 In reply to Atticus-W [2013-12-22 10:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Javajunkie1976 [2013-04-05 04:12:20 +0000 UTC]

I like the backstory. Very inventive, though I did spot some spelling errors.

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Atticus-W In reply to Javajunkie1976 [2013-04-05 19:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I really enjoyed working on this project, exploring a wholly under-appreciated era. Feel free to point out any spelling errors you've observed.

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Javajunkie1976 In reply to Atticus-W [2013-04-05 19:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem...hehe. Keep up the good work.

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gunslinger87 [2010-03-01 23:58:28 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Now I see why the first contest was SO close!

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Atticus-W In reply to gunslinger87 [2010-03-03 05:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha, thanks.

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Sampug394 [2010-02-11 00:43:10 +0000 UTC]

...Dude.

THIS WINNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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Atticus-W In reply to Sampug394 [2010-02-11 01:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks kindly.

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Consolidation720 [2010-02-11 00:15:27 +0000 UTC]

very nice..but errr..
i know has been asking but..
IS MEEN DONE YET!?

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Atticus-W In reply to Consolidation720 [2010-02-11 01:49:39 +0000 UTC]

If it WASN'T DONE, you wouldn't be SITTIN' 'ERE, LOOKIN' AT IT NOW WOULD YOU??

That is to say, if it were done I'd have posted it. Which is also to say that when it is done I WILL post it. ^^

Thanks anyway. ^^

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Consolidation720 In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-11 06:52:36 +0000 UTC]

All right, ill shut up and wait

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Atticus-W In reply to Consolidation720 [2010-02-11 19:45:43 +0000 UTC]

That's the way ye do it.

(Kidding, kidding. XD)

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Consolidation720 In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-11 21:43:45 +0000 UTC]

(you betta be) jk

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simulatortrain [2010-02-10 21:58:47 +0000 UTC]

WINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

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Atticus-W In reply to simulatortrain [2010-02-10 22:02:56 +0000 UTC]

T'anks. ^^

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PaxAeternum [2010-02-10 21:49:02 +0000 UTC]

"EMERGENCY BRAKE" XDDDDDDD

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Atticus-W In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-02-10 21:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Way glad someone noticed that. (WHEN REVERSING THE ENGINE ISN'T ENOUGH! XD)

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Railwolf In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-11 00:58:41 +0000 UTC]

and I went to all the trouble developing a hand brake for mine! XDXDXD shoulda just used a cinder block! XDXDXDXDXDXD

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Atticus-W In reply to Railwolf [2010-02-11 01:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha! XD Seriously, I just didn't want/forgot to make a brake system. And for all I know, our dear inventor friends couldn't figure anything out either.

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PaxAeternum In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-10 22:07:29 +0000 UTC]

RRIIGGHHHTTTTTT

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PaxAeternum [2010-02-10 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDD MERCURY-BASED PRESSURE GAUGE

THATS JUST....ATTICUS WIN

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Atticus-W In reply to PaxAeternum [2010-02-10 21:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Nar, I'm honored, but it's Stephenson win. The Rocket had a device rather like that affixed to her smokestack. (Come to think of it... I hope the Rocket didn't INVENT that thing, or I'm using something two years early! XD)

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Railwolf [2010-02-10 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Very nice atty, had to download it to see all the winess. This one really is up there ^^ all the details and just general utility of the locomotive really pulls it out. ^^

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Atticus-W In reply to Railwolf [2010-02-10 21:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks much! I was going for that rather Spartan look... though, unfortunately, that idea resulted in a kitchen that appears to be made out of plywood, which I'm willing to bet wasn't invented yet! XD

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PaxAeternum In reply to Railwolf [2010-02-10 21:49:18 +0000 UTC]

doht forget the emergency brake! XD

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Kota123 [2010-02-10 21:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Love every little detail on this piece. Well done, Atticus!

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Atticus-W In reply to Kota123 [2010-02-10 21:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Kota! Detail was a little tricky given how crude the whole thing is supposed to be (except for the engine, which detailed itself )... folks like A.J. or Adam no doubt could have pulled the whole thing off better than I have, but eh.

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Plokman6 [2010-02-10 20:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Thats cool!

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Atticus-W In reply to Plokman6 [2010-02-10 20:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much!

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Plokman6 In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-10 21:20:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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JoeltheSwedishDragon [2010-02-10 20:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Cool, man. =]

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Atticus-W In reply to JoeltheSwedishDragon [2010-02-10 20:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JoeltheSwedishDragon In reply to Atticus-W [2010-02-10 23:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes.

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