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Other Statistics:Name: Raider
AKA: Raid, Rai
Function: Warrior
Transformation: Single-headed land dragon
Continuity: Armada, AU, and Cybertron, Mild AU
Weapons Preference: Meelee weapons, Battle Blades, claws, talons, tail mace
Theme Song: Animal I Have Become - Three Days Grace
Voice Actor: Kristian Ayre (The same guy that did Ryura from Inuyasha the Movie 4: Fire on the Mystic Island. Just picture him not sounding as evil...)
Height: 46 ft. Robot Mode (just for reference, Armada Prime is like in the mid/high 20's...)
Weight: 54,140 Lbs.
Description:
This is a profile of one of my earlier original Transformers, Raider, done in the style of the Generation 1 "More Than Meets The Eye" pages... Even though he's not supposed to be in the G1 timeline. Originally completed for the HMW Character Pics thread over in the Heavy Metal War TF Game forum... and somesuch. I was on a MTMTE binge and wanted to get all my animal TF's done, so... naturally Raider got hisself fleshed out.
Also, if you want to see a higher-resolution version of his robot and dragon modes, head on over hurr: [link]
As for his backstory... well, we'll go with the Cybertron timeline for this one with hints of his Armada past.
Basically... Back during the Minicon Wars, Raider (still a tot/baby) was chucked through a warp gate on Cybertron by a particularly nasty Decepticon (After the outpost he and his parents were stationed at was attacked. Both his real 'rents were killed.), and ended up being sent to the 'Con's Moon base several galaxies away. If you've read "Baby Blues", you know that Wheeljack ends up smuggling Raider to the Autobots, joins them, there's chemistry between him and Windy, the three become a makeshift family, blah blah BLAH.
Anyhoo, this is where things take a turn AWAY from the direction of the old fanfic... fast forward a few months to when the Decepticons break into the base and steal the Requiem Blaster. Raider... goes missing. It's not known how, all I know is that in the commotion Raider is gone, presumed dead... (This, of course, breaks Windracer and Wheeljack's hearts, as well as the rest of the Autobots.) Strangely enough, however, he's found by EVAC (keep in mind that Evac has been an Earth Guardian for millions of years. I'd assume he laid low during the Micron Wars like Crosswise did... minus the whole being encased in a glacier dealio.), and he RAISES him for a time. Until Raider is old enough to take care of himself, and then Evac sets him loose on the Earth since 'Vaccy's the Guardian of Planet Earth and all and has plenty o' important Guardian-y things to do....
Raider makes his way to Western Europe, where he then adopts the form of a Western style dragon (remember the OLD, skinny-stick Raider? That's the one.). He realizes, though, that to keep hidden he must migrate further East, to Asia and the like, where he remains hidden throughout the Energon Wars and into the Cybertronian Wars.
THEN, the whole shindig with the black hole comes about, and he hears that the Autobots are returning to Earth (if only in disguise...). Raid, naturally, has faint memories of other Transformers that took care of him as an infant, and naturally wants to investigate. At this point Windracer's probably hooked back up with the Autobots after her hiatus in Energon, too, I might add...
Just as he's about to make his prescence known to the other Autobots, Megatron and his baddies swoop down onto the good guys with the idea that they're going to take control of the Omega Lock. Again. Still incomplete but with two of the keys inserted (Jungle, Speed. Earth doesn't get added until Starscream takes it, IIRC)... Anyshoe, Vector Prime is told to flee with the Lock while Optimus and the others hold off the tiny band of Evil-Doers. As he takes off into the skies over the forrested valley where they're fighting, he's shot down, and loses the lock amongst the thick foliage.
Guess who finds it? *wink wink*
So Raider has the lock, not knowing how valuable it really is to both parties. Megatron and the 'cons get about to searching for said Omega Lock, and eventually come across our poor intrepid hero... alone. When Raider discovers the gravity of his situation, he does his best to protect the artifact from falling into their hands, but at this point in his life he's just too weak a fighter to withstand the onslaught from the much more powerful Decepticon soldiers, and soon recieves teh smackdown0rz. Just as he's about to stasis lock, however, the Omega Lock (and ultimately, Primus...) prove to have a different agenda.
The partially completed lock begins to glow, and Raider is engulfed in the light of Primus (Overhaul/Leobreaker, style. : D). He is ultimately reformatted, recieving a massive power boost from both the Jungle and Speed planet keys. While the Speed Key really doesn't do much for him (except maybe boost his mental capacities. He wasn't stupid to begin with, mind you, it probably "matured" his mind or something), the Jungle key grants him a new, giant, frighteningly powerful body, ehnanced combat skills, courage... the works.
But unfortunately, Megatron and his crew still escape with the Omega Lock. They plan to finally strike down the Autobots, but just as Megs is about to waste Optimus Prime once and for all... none other than Raider decides to intervene! Unable to bring Megatron down, he does, however, give the Autobots the opportunity to re-capture the Lock yet again. Once it's in Prime's hands, the Decepticons flee, leaving the good guys to thank their giant, nameless hero.
He shyly introduces himself to the rest of the team, surprising the hell out of the handful of Autobots that knew him back when he was nothing more than an anklebiter... (Optimus Prime, Hotshot, Red Alert, Jetfire, Windracer, and even Evac since he couldn't recognize him in his new form) Commence crappy sappy scene between foster mother and son, maybe some instances where Raider actually RECALLS tidbits of his childhood (particularly this one scene where Hotshot was trying to give Raider a bath, left his guard down, and as a result there was a wild goose chase around the Autobase to capture the soapy nekked babybot. XD), yadda yadda yadda... When it comes right down to it, Optimus invites the formerly MIA mech to join the team... which he does. While still being caught up in this tumultous war for the Planet Keys, Raider couldn't be happier. He'd finally found a makeshift "family" for himself after almost endless years of lonliness and solitude...
Oooo, that was kinda poetic. I think I'm getting good at this.
But there's something more to Raider's new transformation... a strange side-effect bestowed upon him by the Beast Key that he has to learn to control, almost like a darker, animalistic side of him, and unfortunately... he has no clue how to handle it. When his loved ones are in danger he snaps, flying off the handle into blind rages where he acts on one impulse: destroy. Little is safe from him when he is in this state, even fellow Autobots if they approach him wrong (in one fight he accidentally snapped at Quickmix, unable to discern if the Gigantian was friend or foe. He wasn't hurt, just sent face-first into the ground after Raid' picked him up and threw him over his shoulder...)
But because of this strange defect, it has pushed Raider even farther into a quiet, pacificistic, withdrawn state for fear of losing control of the inner beast and doing something he would regret for the rest of his life. He is constantly trying to compensate for his flaw outside of combat, acting kind and gentle to a fault in the hopes that it will keep his inner evils at bay.
Anyway, FEAR! or... not fear! .... idunno. ._.; He's not realleh the fearsome type, is he? XD
My other Original Transformer MTMTE Pages:
- Windracer [link]
- Feralbrawn [link]
- Aurora [link]
- Aquila [link]
- Raindance [link]
Transformers (c) Hasbro
Raider (c) me
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Comments: 51
EquesSpiritus [2009-08-13 02:25:58 +0000 UTC]
very interesting character you have. so what kind of characters are you working on now?
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TeiOuja [2009-02-16 10:12:29 +0000 UTC]
*Imagines raider tripping on something, than making a huge mess*
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ShockWaveX2 [2008-09-09 12:41:08 +0000 UTC]
You should do a fan fic story about Raider, I would love to read it.
He looks he could anyone's aft any day.
Question: Just how did you make the profile background?
Because I just might use one for a OC of mine. With your permission of course.
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GWolf21 [2007-08-12 21:26:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh you have got to give him a fic. Preferably one showing the lighter side...and then one where he kicks the crap out of Scourge!!!!! Now, do it now woman!!!.....why are you still sitting there dammit, Daggerjaw, eat her until she writes something!
(my fc, can't draw to save me life, so I got jazylh to do him
[link] putting his profile up on DA tonight...anyway )....now write!!!!!
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DranzersFire [2007-03-13 05:17:27 +0000 UTC]
Ahh so this is the famous Raider I've heard so much about...he looks really cool!! Well done!!
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Roter-Tod [2007-03-11 04:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Well I must say I still think it looks like Megatron and Power Rangers combined, But good job anyways. It looks like it'd come straight from a comic book.
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to Roter-Tod [2007-03-11 04:31:14 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks.
Megatron and Power Rangers... you mean the good Power Rangers, right? Not that lame stuff they have on nowadays, I hope...
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Roter-Tod In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2007-03-11 04:34:10 +0000 UTC]
lol only one 1 Power Rangers in my book. the other 69 (random #) can kiss my ass.
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to Roter-Tod [2007-03-11 04:38:18 +0000 UTC]
A-MEN!
MMPR kicked ASS. Tommy (I think that was his name? White Ranger? @_@) was the shiiiiiiat. XD
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Roter-Tod In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2007-03-11 04:41:54 +0000 UTC]
Man Green Ranger beat all down with that flute of his. Lol how do I remember all this?
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to Roter-Tod [2007-03-11 04:46:58 +0000 UTC]
I don't know. I don't know how I'm remembering it either. xD
Oh, the movie was badass too. With those new Zords and shit... and the purple ooze guy. Ahhh I'd watch that again if I could.
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Roter-Tod In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2007-03-11 04:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Sigh good times good times.
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Nemotocyst [2007-01-19 02:15:01 +0000 UTC]
wow nice dragon alt. and for that matter i just saw your gallery. your pretty good! i think im gonna watch you.
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victortky [2006-12-14 02:22:06 +0000 UTC]
A robot that has a shy personality behind his powerful shell. Very well done, I like his dragon mode, it reminds me of dragons I have seen in novels. I just hope no one will hug him, as the unlucky fellow will surely end up in the hospital. Nevertheless, I like his robot mode and pose. Excellent Work !
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GalaxyDancer [2006-11-07 03:40:14 +0000 UTC]
Well, you've got this contest all wrapped up and neatly packaged with a bow on top.
EXCELLENT work, my friend, and touche.
*Must try harder for the next contest, since it's only remotely possible that she'll win even third place this time*
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to GalaxyDancer [2006-11-07 12:43:24 +0000 UTC]
holy poop! *chokes* I do?! O.O
Wull. That's a surprise! XD
Anyway, thank you for the kind words. ^O^ *bows gratefully*
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LeoOsaka [2006-11-05 15:02:20 +0000 UTC]
I just added this to the contest on CO and I HAD to sign over to my account so i could tell you how freaking awesome this is XD! You have DEFINATELY god MY vote! <3
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to LeoOsaka [2006-11-05 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]
=^o^= shucks, thank you veddy much. X3
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LeoOsaka In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-11-05 15:23:39 +0000 UTC]
But of course =3 Incredible art deserves love!
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EuroBean [2006-11-02 20:26:25 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! I wonder how people make their MTMTE's look really cool...
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to EuroBean [2006-11-06 00:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Just a lotta time and effort, I guess. ^^
This took me a good long while I think... the art was the easy part... it was the quote and bio that kept me from posting this for so long. XD
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BlueKazenate [2006-10-29 23:40:12 +0000 UTC]
*kicks self* dam it i'm way late on this...i was wondering what i had been forgetting*flail* anyways...as a fan...i squee XD he's really freaking awesome, and adorable all at the same time..which by all means..the best combo ever XD. awe XD he's shy round pretty females lol XD Dfly would just roll her eyes(if it were possible) and walk the other way cause she's an idiot like that XD amazing job as always*bows as a loyal fangirl should LOL*
DFly-oh brother*face palms*
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StarDancer5 [2006-10-28 16:48:49 +0000 UTC]
Big, gentle and pretty!! Looks great Windracer!!
Love the alt modes you make, especially because they're not decepticons this time.
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DarkStatic [2006-10-23 09:21:14 +0000 UTC]
nice profile...*imagines raider tripping over his own tail* hehe still like the design...especially the dragon part.
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Schmedderling [2006-10-22 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]
XD Awesome! That is the absolutly perfect quote for him!
Poor Raider, so big he can't even fit entirely into the image.
Nice description and everthing, everyone loves Raider! ^_^ I feel for him about the clumsyness though, although I'm not clumsy, just very, very forgetful...
And if I haven't said it before, I love Raider's design.
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darktzeratul [2006-10-22 19:37:49 +0000 UTC]
The art is very good, but the way the spikes break up the text makes it very hard to read. Having the part between the spikes as a seperate paragraph would work better than splitting the lines as you're doing right now.
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to darktzeratul [2006-10-24 01:43:11 +0000 UTC]
Wellll..... I didn't exactly make two separate columns, I just resized the robot image a bit. Gave me more room to condense the lines and make it a bit easier for people to read. Thanks muchly for the suggestion.
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darktzeratul In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-10-24 08:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Looks MUCH better now. Very nice work all-around.
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TehCrab [2006-10-22 16:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh, I love that quote!
XD Man, I just had a sudden flashback to when Raider first showed up. That feels like it was sooo long ago...
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to TehCrab [2006-10-22 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh gawd, all the way back in ye fanfics of olde... @_@;
I need to f'n rewrite the ENTIRE Windracer saga... The human-turned TF thing just screams mary sue and... pluh. ;__; She's sue enough to begin with. >__e;
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TehCrab In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-10-23 04:32:02 +0000 UTC]
XD It's not a daunting task to edit the whole thing. Hell, since it's been so long, just start saying that she was stationed on Earth or sommin. O_o
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to TehCrab [2006-10-23 04:50:08 +0000 UTC]
That's what I was going to do... I was also going to tie in part of a smut story Brent and I started, but never finished. It involved Hotshot and Wheeljack back when they were both Autobots, meeting up with Windracer and his character, Nightstreak... they sort of became the "four musketeers", but then it all went to sh!t when the big "fire fiasco" thing rolled around. Windracer went MIA, probably didn't appear until she showed up in the midst of the Minicon war...
Oh, and I have a NAME for her Minicon, now.... seeing as how it was "Sideswipe"... >o> *ahem* I didn't know there was going to be a canon Sideswipe in Armada! ;__;'!! ... Anyway, it's Spitfire... pretty generic, but there ain't no other Spitfire's in Armada so tis all good. :B
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TehCrab In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-10-23 17:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Woo! Go Spitfire!
Though I wouldn't call it generic. I've never heard it before. Now Spitblast would've been generic. XD
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Jormungander [2006-10-22 06:36:58 +0000 UTC]
He has a very deep and meaningful quote...nice!
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TFDarkscream [2006-10-22 03:14:17 +0000 UTC]
^_^ I love the quote that you gave Raider.
*Pauses and grins* Hey Windy...know where I can grab a blank MTMTE template like you got?
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to TFDarkscream [2006-11-06 00:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Weeeellll... the one I have I made from pseudo-scratch. I took a High-Resolution MTMTE page (can't remember of which character...), and with some clever copy/pasting jobs I was able to blank out the entire sheet, save for the "Bio", "Abilities", "Weaknesses", "Alternate Mode", and "Function" texts. @_@;
I can save it as a blank page for you if you want... the one I have on my photobucket account is of a much lower quality than this. xD;
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TFDarkscream In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-11-06 03:10:57 +0000 UTC]
I actualy found the Autobot one. ^^ Did a search for blank templates and found yours ironicly.
Just need a D-Con one and to figure out which of my texts work.
XP I need to draw mechs!
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Autobot-Windracer In reply to TFDarkscream [2006-11-06 03:16:44 +0000 UTC]
Well for the name, altmode description, and function I think I used... Swiss911-something or other... the text themselves, I think I used either Arial or Veranda... I can't remember. @_@;
Hope that's helpful. While they're not the EXACT fonts, they look close enough to pull off the effect. XD;
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TFDarkscream In reply to Autobot-Windracer [2006-11-06 03:19:45 +0000 UTC]
*Laughs* It helps.
^_^ Well I'll find something close enough. I got plenty of TF fonts and other junk available.
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neonbloo25 In reply to TFDarkscream [2008-09-04 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]
2 thumbs up on that comment
but really, MAXIMUM AWESOMENESS!!!
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