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Description
third set with single vp in mind along with self critique for past 2 and a mini mech i got bored and painted but forgot to render T_T starting ctrl paint rendering course so hopefully these'll stop looking like crap soon

mistakes ive noticed:
lightsource tends to remain direct and illuminating only small fraction of forms. should attempt more overcast/ambient lighting with scene in mind
too many abrupt unblended edges of values/gradients with occasional weak/faint shadows
value range, value range, value range
reflected/bounce light poorly considered. proper scenes with visible/valued or colored surfaces should be tried
cast shadow shape & value
Level of geometry for random forms is either too ambitious or too simple often both on a single form. "broad stroke" the biggest intended geometry after outline?

Description
third set with single vp in mind along with self critique for past 2 and a mini mech i got bored and painted but forgot to render T_T starting ctrl paint rendering course so hopefully these'll stop looking like crap soon

mistakes ive noticed:
lightsource tends to remain direct and illuminating only small fraction of forms. should attempt more overcast/ambient lighting with scene in mind
too many abrupt unblended edges of values/gradients with occasional weak/faint shadows
value range, value range, value range
reflected/bounce light poorly considered. proper scenes with visible/valued or colored surfaces should be tried
cast shadow shape & value
Level of geometry for random forms is either too ambitious or too simple often both on a single form. "broad stroke" the biggest intended geometry after outline?