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sirhcx [2012-09-04 20:13:25 +0000 UTC]
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I'm still mesmerized by the RD's mane and tail...
1 - The art style that you chose works wonderfully for the atmosphere and overall vibe of mlp. The slight imperfections in the outlines and a nice touch of character, nicely accompanied by the overflow of the fill.
2 - I really like the emplacement shown between the two. The way they are hugging one another is shown as a type of understanding, which shows great emotion. The eyes being closed adds a cool aspect alongside Rarity's crying.
3 - There isnt anything major wrong with this, but a touch of blue for Rarity's cutie mark would ad a bit more depth.
Closing Comments - You have a very interesting style which shows very powerful emotions. I look forward viewing more works of this caliber.
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SpeedWolf86 In reply to sirhcx [2022-09-03 05:14:36 +0000 UTC]
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RoyalInBlue [2012-09-03 04:32:09 +0000 UTC]
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This was a nice piece of work, it has certainly been some time since I saw something as emotional as this.
The watercolor adds a depth to it that I personally think vectoring cannot. The smudging was a bit of an off-put for me, but it looks so much better than all the neat, bland coloring you find in vectors.
The emotion that you portrayed in this is fantastic, and almost all the elements were placed well. The only problem I had was the far wing, which looks like it is residing on top of her leg from the angle you used.
Coloring was amazing. The colors, instead of being stopped short by one another, in this case simply flowed into each other, creating an amazing visual effect.
I did find RD's mane got a little bit messy and rushed at the end, though, just a minor nitpick. Rarity's head dimensions were a bit off too, her head is rather bulbous.
All in all, I enjoyed this a lot. 8/10, because I want to see you do better.
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Klutzershy88 [2012-09-01 18:31:50 +0000 UTC]
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Wow! I have never seen a better drawing than this one i am seeing now. The Colors and perfect sketch clash together perfectly and i think this is TRULY amazing. I really enjoy how close you got all the details, why, i could say this is just perfect. Once again, i really love the pose, as i could probably never draw this amazing. You captured rarity's mane and tail perfect, and RD's pose is exquisite. I really think it cant get any better than this! Another thing is i really enjoy the 'watercolour' look where the colors go out of lines, now thats creativity. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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AussieGriffin [2014-05-16 02:25:46 +0000 UTC]
I love the use of water colours to enhance the tone and the emotional impact. a great work in almost every aspect. Favorite material.
A.G.
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DarkFlame75 [2012-11-27 20:32:52 +0000 UTC]
Really nice! I love the shape of Rarity's curls especially. The way that Rainbow's hair looks like paint splatters also grabs my attention.
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PianoPonky [2012-11-27 07:30:23 +0000 UTC]
That is adorable. I love love love the sketchy style, and they way it's colored is very cool. Great job here.
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darksonickiller [2012-09-18 22:39:44 +0000 UTC]
This is really good would mind if I use this as a cover image for my upcoming FIMfiction please?
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averagedraw In reply to darksonickiller [2012-09-19 21:12:52 +0000 UTC]
Hi. Yes, you can use it as you please. Thanks.
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darksonickiller In reply to averagedraw [2012-09-19 22:30:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh Thanks so much I'll be sure to let you read my story as soon as i finish it!
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averagedraw In reply to darksonickiller [2012-09-20 17:32:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, Darksonickiller! Waiting for your story.
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darksonickiller In reply to Flameabel [2012-09-19 22:43:07 +0000 UTC]
I intend on making one now that I can use the pic
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averagedraw In reply to Flameabel [2012-09-10 15:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Definitely and I let spectators write this story for themselves.
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Flameabel In reply to averagedraw [2012-09-10 15:50:10 +0000 UTC]
Woah, thats actually pretty nice! Can imagine the variety of stories being created in all these minds
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mlprocks123 [2012-09-09 17:56:19 +0000 UTC]
maybe erase all accses color from this and then it will be fine!!
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Psykosis35d [2012-09-09 06:11:14 +0000 UTC]
This is a very touching picture, and the style is beautiful... but Dash's Cutie Mark is backwards. I'm sorry if that sounds nitpicky, but it really pushes my buttons when people make that mistake.
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sirhcx In reply to averagedraw [2012-09-06 17:23:47 +0000 UTC]
Well its done very well considering it fooled me. What program did you use?
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averagedraw In reply to sirhcx [2012-09-06 18:27:07 +0000 UTC]
One of new paint brushes in new Sketchbook Pro. And Thanks for critique. I appreciate this very much.
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Goofydoodle [2012-09-02 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]
My jaw dropped from the cuteness..
I was gonna say my manliness organ just exploded but i realised that sounded a tad wrong... Imma just stick to my heart exploding!
Really well drawn i like it
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pootiet12345 [2012-09-02 06:54:12 +0000 UTC]
OH COME ON BRONIES... i give my friend a hug and all of you think there is some lesbian undertone to it
what the hell do you mean there's nothing lesbian about it?!
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rangerkom [2012-09-02 05:24:21 +0000 UTC]
Amazing. There's a story hidden in this picture. I wonder who is comforting who and why.
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Animallia [2012-09-01 20:10:31 +0000 UTC]
God... I can't speak of nothing. That amazed me :speechless:
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FantasyDragons [2012-09-01 20:10:23 +0000 UTC]
Aww this is adorable!
Great colours and shadows too
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GauntletPorsche [2012-09-01 19:24:34 +0000 UTC]
Awww, so cute, but why is Rarity crying? D:
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averagedraw In reply to GauntletPorsche [2012-09-01 20:10:38 +0000 UTC]
I am letting your imagination to find the answer.
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