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Published: 2015-10-13 15:41:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 5254; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
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PART 1INT. PALACE HALLWAY
(Ariel comes dashing down the long flight of stairs with a big smile on her face. But then she stops dead in her tracks. Eric is with a very beautiful, dark-haired maiden. Grimbsy & Carlotta are standing toward the back of the room, looking SOMBER. As Eric speaks, there’s something odd about his manner. He seems almost as if he were in a hypnotic trance. The maiden clings TIGHTLY to Eric.)
ERIC: Ariel, I’d like you to meet Vanessa. She saved my life a few weeks ago. I’ve been trying to find her ever since.
(Vanessa smiles sweetly at Ariel, who draws back in shock & confusion. She keeps thinking “How can this be?” to herself. Sebastian watches from the staircase, also perplexed.)
ERIC: We’re going to get married onboard the ship at sea, this afternoon at sunset. I want you to be there, Ariel. I-
(Ariel is CRUSHED, shaking her head in disbelief. Her whole world is collapsing around her. She looks over at Grimbsy & Carlotta, who are obviously distressed and disappointed about the situation, but there’s nothing they can do. Angry, confused & trying to fight back her tears, she reels away from Eric & races out of the room.)
ERIC: Ariel? Ariel, wait!
(Eric starts after Ariel but Vanessa gently pulls him back. She kisses him sweetly. Unseen by anyone but the audience, a DIABOLICAL SMILE crosses her face. The cape around her slips slightly & we see Ursula’s nautilus shell with ARIEL’S VOICE, handing around her neck.)
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Little Mermaid movie & original transcript (c) Disney
False TLM cast & this interpretation (c) me
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Comments: 3
Demonicweasel [2015-10-13 18:52:51 +0000 UTC]
Woah, you already have another part out! This one is looking pretty good. I think what I like best so far is how you've subtly altered the clothes to fit in with the more realistic style. Both Ariel and Vanessa's dresses are looking nice with a little texture.
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AverageJoeArtwork In reply to Demonicweasel [2015-10-14 01:59:30 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't really think of it as subtle, it's just making it more realistic. That alone is never easy (I'm mostly worried about how to do merpeople tails), but we'll see as we go along. Ariel's nightgown I based off this one from Marie Antoinette (with a color change) & Vanessa's is both a pic by briberry & a skirt design from jwcd889 .
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