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Published: 2014-10-29 06:44:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 756; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description Roar of wind through dry autumn leaves
Sounds like surf on some white beach
Larry's on the piano, banging away
Horizontal windchimes, mad fugues
His fingers grown nine inches long

Bill thinks it will play through, but
He's wearing white after labor day
Sandra can't put down the book of her life
And I'm still somewhere on a beach
Drowning in the cold autumn air

Breathe in, breathe out; stop; no, go
Bells, bells, bells, bedeviled ring
Jeannie's crooked smile stretches for miles
All the way down to some white beach
Where I'm in the water, kissing sharks
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Comments: 31

sherbetblooms [2014-11-11 08:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow. And then that ending. Holy shit - this is the tits (.)(.) Β 

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Bark In reply to sherbetblooms [2014-11-11 09:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and thanks for faving!

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brassteeth [2014-11-03 10:51:54 +0000 UTC]

This is very good indeed. I find myself in a beat and reaching to form faces from names of those I will never meet...

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Bark In reply to brassteeth [2014-11-06 17:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. That's really what it's about... the people I've known.

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Poetrymann [2014-11-02 20:22:01 +0000 UTC]

This wonderful work is featured here: Β Welcome, November!

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All-My-Darkness [2014-11-02 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Imagery out the ass.

Shark kissing and 9 inch fingers..

Loving the somewhat dying Alice in not so Wonderful Land

Touches

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Bark In reply to All-My-Darkness [2014-11-06 17:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Dark.

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BlackBowfin [2014-10-30 02:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Delightfully abstract, my friend. Β 

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Bark In reply to BlackBowfin [2014-10-31 10:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Shyll-j [2014-10-29 22:00:17 +0000 UTC]

You are on a roll my friend, Bravo!

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Bark In reply to Shyll-j [2014-10-31 10:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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xlntwtch [2014-10-29 18:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I like the entire poem,Β but I'll have to think about it more too. That's what I like about yourΒ work.

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Bark In reply to xlntwtch [2014-10-29 21:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, that's very nice of you to say.

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m-gosia [2014-10-29 18:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Bark In reply to m-gosia [2014-10-29 21:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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m-gosia In reply to Bark [2014-10-30 18:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Β Β 

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LancelotPrice [2014-10-29 13:09:42 +0000 UTC]

As a hobbyist engineering designer, I have to wonder how horizontal wind chimes work.

Suitably symbolic and surreal, Mr. Sharkkisser.

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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-10-29 16:02:12 +0000 UTC]

I meant that the wind was blowing so hard that the wind chimes were horizontal. Thanks, Lance.

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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-10-29 18:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Wind chimes suspended from the top can never be fully horizontal, but a 400 mile per hour breeze could get them pretty close.

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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-10-29 21:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Right as usual.

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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-10-29 21:46:14 +0000 UTC]

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robwahl [2014-10-29 11:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Bark In reply to robwahl [2014-10-29 12:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man. I wasn't sure about this one.

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robwahl In reply to Bark [2014-10-30 13:02:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I liked the surreal feel to it....like a good buzz on a 767 Mexican cactus on its way to paradise.

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jennystokes [2014-10-29 09:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Love love this.................Mr Dylan!!!!!!!

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-10-29 11:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you, but I'm no Dylan... Bob or Thomas!

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-10-29 12:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Bob!
Reminded me of several songs and I think you are just as good....................SO put that in your pipe and smoke it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-10-29 12:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! I'd rather use something else in my pipe!

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-10-29 12:34:17 +0000 UTC]

I am sure you would........good for pain?

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-10-29 12:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-10-29 12:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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