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A ninety foot tall cross bordered in stable white neon; above it another sign, running red and white lights. It reads “Hope” for a few seconds, switches to “Dope” then back again. Caution: causes seizures in those prone to epilepsy. At the bottom, men with nicotine-stained fingers stir great pots of jambalaya. Occasional cigarette ash drops into the pots for seasoning. Look up; yellow-tooth smile.Up on a lonely hill a woman plays violin. A classical tune that I don’t know, something about the wind in the trees. There are no trees here, though, only rocks and ocean. She hears bells in the distance, calling her home, but she hasn’t finished her song. The last note has to be played before she can go. Her mother weeps.
I heard a woman read her poetry today… such a clear and beautiful voice. My own has grown ragged and rough with too many years of smoke and drink. We should read something together, I think; her one stanza and I the next. Something about beauty and death, maybe.
The cross has been torn down now, unplugged and dark. Shops along the wet street are empty, boarded over. Soon bulldozers will come, and no one will know that this place ever existed. The jambalaya men have moved across the border and sit in a small café, their beards wet with beer.
I stand with the poet-woman on a hill, reading this to you, stanza by stanza. The violin plays on behind us. The song she plays has no ending. We watch as construction begins on the empty lot far below. A neon cross is the first to go up. It’s always the same.
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Comments: 33
jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 05:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh!
Good Luck............be thinking of you.
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Bark In reply to AyeAye12 [2014-12-10 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! (Don't tell me you've never had jambalaya?)
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Bark In reply to AyeAye12 [2014-12-11 04:35:41 +0000 UTC]
No, it's a good Cajun dish, best made with seafood. If you ever get a chance, be sure to try it!
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alapip [2014-12-10 16:25:10 +0000 UTC]
"Gladly, the cross-eyed bear"
the Cross People are especially cross outside clinics,
sometimes coming across welcomingly otherwise.
they have the answers, [to questions we don't ask].
just listen, politely, mutely. eventually they'll go away.
oh. and, stare at them as if they're crazy, [they are].
they Do think to get extra points for us heathens.
so, there's that... pip
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LancelotPrice [2014-12-10 14:47:59 +0000 UTC]
Only a twenty foot cross? How puny. We have one about three miles from here that's about 80 or a hundred feet high. They had to put a warning beacon on it to ward off low-flying planes and those tv news helicopters that chase today's shooting murder. If there's only one today. I know a neighbor who's a member of the church that put the thing up. I think they look on it as sending a message of light and hope to the world of a better life after this one, but it looks suspiciously like their "sin" of Pride to me. Biggest damn' cross I've seen outside of a Catholic country in South America somewhere. And this little church here is not even Catholic.
Notice how I focus on the little non-artistic details that just happen to catch my eye and brain.
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Across the highway
the 'heathens' stared up
at the hundred foot cross
and Shakespeare sang
Hey ho, and the wind and the rain
And the lightning came
Struck the cross down
to the ground
See oh ye gods
what fools these mortals be
To believe there are gods
Oh such fools
and a Hey ho
and the wind and the rain
The 'heathens' had another beer
and partied on
in the wind and the rain
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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-12-10 16:45:28 +0000 UTC]
I changed the height of the cross to ninety. When I started its height was in reference to a person, but the piece outgrew it.
I'm with the heathens on your bit.
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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-12-10 17:50:18 +0000 UTC]
Me, too, except I'd be drinking rum and coke or Smirnoff's malt liquor.
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