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Published: 2014-12-10 08:11:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 629; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description A ninety foot tall cross bordered in stable white neon; above it another sign, running red and white lights. It reads “Hope” for a few seconds, switches to “Dope” then back again.  Caution: causes seizures in those prone to epilepsy. At the bottom, men with nicotine-stained fingers stir great pots of jambalaya. Occasional cigarette ash drops into the pots for seasoning. Look up; yellow-tooth smile.

Up on a lonely hill a woman plays violin. A classical tune that I don’t know, something about the wind in the trees. There are no trees here, though, only rocks and ocean. She hears bells in the distance, calling her home, but she hasn’t finished her song. The last note has to be played before she can go. Her mother weeps.

I heard a woman read her poetry today… such a clear and beautiful voice. My own has grown ragged and rough with too many years of smoke and drink. We should read something together, I think; her one stanza and I the next. Something about beauty and death, maybe.

The cross has been torn down now, unplugged and dark. Shops along the wet street are empty, boarded over. Soon bulldozers will come, and no one will know that this place ever existed. The jambalaya men have moved across the border and sit in a small café, their beards wet with beer.

I stand with the poet-woman on a hill, reading this to you, stanza by stanza. The violin plays on behind us. The song she plays has no ending. We watch as construction begins on the empty lot far below. A neon cross is the first to go up. It’s always the same.
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Comments: 33

BlackBowfin [2014-12-13 16:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Great piece, buddy!

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Bark In reply to BlackBowfin [2014-12-13 18:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, my friend!

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BlackBowfin In reply to Bark [2014-12-13 18:12:15 +0000 UTC]

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m-gosia [2014-12-11 16:54:06 +0000 UTC]

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Bark In reply to m-gosia [2014-12-11 17:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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m-gosia In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

   

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katiousa15 [2014-12-11 07:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Soooo fantastic!!!

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Bark In reply to katiousa15 [2014-12-11 10:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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katiousa15 In reply to Bark [2014-12-12 06:53:31 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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jennystokes [2014-12-11 02:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Invoking sheer sadness in me.

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-12-11 04:38:55 +0000 UTC]

It's a sad world.

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 04:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is....how are YOU????

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-12-11 04:53:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm peachy.

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 04:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Good....no therapy yet?

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Bark In reply to jennystokes [2014-12-11 04:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Starts Monday morning.

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jennystokes In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 05:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh!
Good Luck............be thinking of you.

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oviedomedina [2014-12-10 19:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!

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Bark In reply to oviedomedina [2014-12-10 20:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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oviedomedina In reply to Bark [2014-12-10 22:06:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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AyeAye12 [2014-12-10 18:15:56 +0000 UTC]

"jambalaya"

Great stuff

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Bark In reply to AyeAye12 [2014-12-10 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! (Don't tell me you've never had jambalaya?)

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AyeAye12 In reply to Bark [2014-12-10 22:54:27 +0000 UTC]

.......

is it weed

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Bark In reply to AyeAye12 [2014-12-11 04:35:41 +0000 UTC]

No, it's a good Cajun dish, best made with seafood. If you ever get a chance, be sure to try it!

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AyeAye12 In reply to Bark [2014-12-11 16:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing

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alapip [2014-12-10 16:25:10 +0000 UTC]

"Gladly, the cross-eyed bear"

the Cross People are especially cross outside clinics,
sometimes coming across welcomingly otherwise.
they have the answers, [to questions we don't ask].
just listen, politely, mutely.  eventually they'll go away.
oh.  and, stare at them as if they're crazy, [they are].

they Do think to get extra points for us heathens.
so, there's that...

pip

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Bark In reply to alapip [2014-12-10 16:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, too true.

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LancelotPrice [2014-12-10 14:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Only a twenty foot cross? How puny. We have one about three miles from here that's about 80 or a hundred feet high. They had to put a warning beacon on it to ward off low-flying planes and those tv news helicopters that chase today's shooting murder. If there's only one today. I know a neighbor who's a member of the church that put the thing up. I think they look on it as sending a message of light and hope to the world of a better life after this one, but it looks suspiciously like their "sin" of Pride to me. Biggest damn' cross I've seen outside of a Catholic country in South America somewhere. And this little church here is not even Catholic.

Notice how I focus on the little non-artistic details that just happen to catch my eye and brain.

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Across the highway 
the 'heathens' stared up 
at the hundred foot cross 
and Shakespeare sang 

Hey ho, and the wind and the rain 
And the lightning came 
Struck the cross down 
to the ground 
See oh ye gods 
what fools these mortals be 
To believe there are gods 
Oh such fools 
and a Hey ho 
and the wind and the rain 

The 'heathens' had another beer 
and partied on 
in the wind and the rain 

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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-12-10 16:45:28 +0000 UTC]

I changed the height of the cross to ninety. When I started its height was in reference to a person, but the piece outgrew it.

I'm with the heathens on your bit.

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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-12-10 17:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Me, too, except I'd be drinking rum and coke or Smirnoff's malt liquor.

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TheBareSheet [2014-12-10 14:13:10 +0000 UTC]

This is great!

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Bark In reply to TheBareSheet [2014-12-10 16:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RichardLeach [2014-12-10 13:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Bark In reply to RichardLeach [2014-12-10 16:42:36 +0000 UTC]

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