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Bark — Star-Watching
Published: 2014-09-01 09:15:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description My breath came in huge gulps, as though trying to swallow the sky
You passed by, sitting cross-legged on a cloud; I could not speak
The dreamflakes I had for breakfast fell around like snow
When I stopped breathing, I dove underwater and swam like mad

The cards we’d been playing with last night were all marked
I could see that clearly now, here in the blurred aquatic silence
Entangled in weeds on the bottom, I lay down to rest
At nightfall, I saw Van Gogh stars in the sky above my new home

“So this is it,” I thought, “my new life as a star-watcher has begun”
The unfinished plans and scraps of paper left above didn’t worry
That was then, this is now; I write poems on fish about you in the sky
The holes in the ozone read them, and tell me how wonderful they are

Really, who could ask for more? I’ve seen worse days.
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Comments: 8

tommyboywood [2014-09-18 20:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Do the fish complain?  Just askin'

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Bark In reply to tommyboywood [2014-09-22 10:52:26 +0000 UTC]

oh, those schools of strange fish... always bitching about something.

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LindArtz [2014-09-18 03:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is really, Wow! From where does it come? I like your style! Enough to give you a watch. ^^

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Bark In reply to LindArtz [2014-09-22 10:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I don't know exactly where it comes from... maybe 2/3 heart, 1/3 head?

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LindArtz In reply to Bark [2014-09-22 20:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Good answer!!

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LancelotPrice [2014-09-01 10:46:43 +0000 UTC]

You went surreal. Bravo!

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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-09-01 10:55:17 +0000 UTC]

An effect of the new group... thanks very much, Lance!

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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-09-01 15:11:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, friend.

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