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Bark — The Artist
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Published: 2014-08-28 09:19:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2665; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 0
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Description She talked to rocks, asking them if they’d be happy
To leave their home for her newest installation piece
She cried sometimes for no reason other than
She felt like having a good cry

Her house was covered in her students’ drawings
She said the best art was produced from innocence
She went mad once, and painted canvas after canvas
In furious strokes of black

The soft blue world of youth at last faded, she grew old
People shook their heads when they saw her
And whispered “poor dear” under their breath
But she was never poor

Her love for everything and everyone never died
It was swept in all directions like a summer breeze
Making people smile without knowing why
But the river rocks know
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Comments: 92

EmmaSloane [2015-03-04 21:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Just wonderful.

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Bark In reply to EmmaSloane [2015-03-05 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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shep4life [2014-12-03 14:50:42 +0000 UTC]

I love this

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Bark In reply to shep4life [2014-12-03 14:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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shep4life In reply to Bark [2014-12-03 23:22:46 +0000 UTC]

So welcome!

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Sammur-amat [2014-11-20 09:32:36 +0000 UTC]

a really lovely read, dearest sir!

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Bark In reply to Sammur-amat [2014-11-20 10:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sammur-amat In reply to Bark [2014-11-20 10:14:25 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure!

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prettyflour [2014-11-16 14:38:48 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured in my journal!

A journey through my favorites.Because last time, this was so much fun!  Come on, let's take a walk through my favorites.
I want to start with my most recent fav- a piece that is an entry for a contest I entered- The ABC's of the Apocalypse Contest.  This one is my personal fav.



Now I want you to see my oldest fav!


This one is the first deviation on my 100th page of favs.  I love the sense of movement in it.

This one is the last deviation on page 150 of my favs.  Great symmetry!

All the Lit. deviations from page 66

I found this one on page 122.  This is TheLunaLily and she is awesome.

This one is from page 4.  Purple20 sure does take some killer macro shots.


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Bark In reply to prettyflour [2014-11-16 16:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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BlackBowfin [2014-10-24 08:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DLR, Ron.  Well deserved!

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Bark In reply to BlackBowfin [2014-10-24 10:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Scott!

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fernknits [2014-10-23 22:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!  Congratulations on your DLR.  

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Bark In reply to fernknits [2014-10-23 22:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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alapip [2014-10-23 17:11:44 +0000 UTC]

a fine choice for a DLR, they made today, Ron.
congratulations - well deserved...

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Bark In reply to alapip [2014-10-23 19:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Pip!

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AyeAye12 [2014-10-23 10:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DLR! Much deserved

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Bark In reply to AyeAye12 [2014-10-23 19:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LancelotPrice [2014-10-23 02:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DLR, Ron!

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Bark In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-10-23 19:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Lance!

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LancelotPrice In reply to Bark [2014-10-23 20:28:49 +0000 UTC]

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DailyLitRecognition [2014-10-23 01:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLR (Daily Literature Recognition) and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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RequiemsandReveries [2014-10-20 22:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Very honest, I wrote one auto-biographical that this reminds me of.  You could have been writing about me.  Haunting, almost

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AElfrics-Cat [2014-10-04 22:34:37 +0000 UTC]

That's remarkably uplifting. Beautiful close x

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Bark In reply to AElfrics-Cat [2014-10-06 08:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm happy that you liked it!

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tommyboywood [2014-09-18 20:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff

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Bark In reply to tommyboywood [2014-09-22 10:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LindArtz [2014-09-18 03:35:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful,...melancholic,...and delightful.

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Bark In reply to LindArtz [2014-09-22 10:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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retransmission [2014-09-15 08:17:04 +0000 UTC]

I read this verse with great interest

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Bark In reply to retransmission [2014-09-15 08:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Sound like someone you know?

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retransmission In reply to Bark [2014-09-15 08:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Possible! It is very close to me...

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wispy-blue [2014-09-06 12:51:37 +0000 UTC]

oh! i hope you know how good this is. i have a splendid time reading.

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Bark In reply to wispy-blue [2014-09-06 13:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I really had no idea whether it was any good until I got the responses. Thanks to you, and all the beautiful people of DA.

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Hfeather53 [2014-09-06 05:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Hello, sir Bark. I hope you are well (=

I'm quite jealous that you pumped something like this out in five minutes. I can't seem to think lately. Can I ask, did she kill herself?

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Bark In reply to Hfeather53 [2014-09-06 07:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I haven't had many five-minute wonders, it was a fluke. And no, she died quite naturally.

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Hfeather53 In reply to Bark [2014-09-06 16:44:51 +0000 UTC]

isn't it funny how poetry can be interpreted different ways?... either that or i'm just slow lol

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Bark In reply to Hfeather53 [2014-09-06 17:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes what's on your mind reads into the piece. You're not slow, and you know it. Live a long life... looking back, it will have been worth it.

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Hfeather53 In reply to Bark [2014-09-06 18:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Poetrymann [2014-09-06 01:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful art is featured here:  scarlettletters.deviantart.com…

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relativi-t [2014-09-05 23:52:35 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful

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Bark In reply to relativi-t [2014-09-06 00:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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relativi-t In reply to Bark [2014-09-06 20:28:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Shyll-j [2014-09-02 00:28:06 +0000 UTC]

O I do like the breeze of this....

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Bark In reply to Shyll-j [2014-09-02 06:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Sher!

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cyranosdemet [2014-09-01 02:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Indeed... the river rocks know.  They were the ones who told me.  Well done!

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Bark In reply to cyranosdemet [2014-09-01 08:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TheLaughingDreamer [2014-08-30 20:13:36 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely wonderful and heart warming

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Bark In reply to TheLaughingDreamer [2014-08-30 23:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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m-gosia [2014-08-30 19:26:58 +0000 UTC]

  

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