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Published: 2020-02-24 02:45:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 591; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 1
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Stock background courtesy of
VaLeNtInE-DeViAnT
The plain text version is here - Butterfly Magic
This is an old one that I just never posted properly
as a visual poem the first time.
So I am redoing it to correct that mistake.
This was originally inspired by a comment from
Bland-Butterfly
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Comments: 22
gallindz [2020-02-27 16:20:47 +0000 UTC]
You are wonderful with words. Just like the butterfly!
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Barosus In reply to gallindz [2020-02-29 03:22:25 +0000 UTC]
That means a lot coming from you. That chocolate poem is still rumbling around in my head.
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gallindz In reply to Barosus [2020-02-29 14:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Im so happy its still rumbling!!! and for the record, your kind words mean a lot coming from you !!!
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Barosus In reply to segura2112 [2020-02-25 00:31:05 +0000 UTC]
I think I should be the one saying that. Thank you! I am so glad you liked my work!
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PrecariouslyPeculiar [2020-02-24 08:28:36 +0000 UTC]
"They write the songs the fairies sing" __
That line really ties it all together for me
Also, beautiful choice of imagery!
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Barosus In reply to PrecariouslyPeculiar [2020-02-24 16:12:34 +0000 UTC]
heeheehee (Massive, massive smile) I loved that line too! I just remembered back as a little kid and watching those old cartoon sing-along things where you follow the bouncing ball across the words, and was thinking about the butterfly's seemingly erratic flight paths, and I thought to myself, "what if it is not so chaotic and we just don't know how to follow what they are spelling out?" It is a thought that has stuck with me ever since.
I loved that stock art too. In fact when I was getting ready to post it today i went back and downloaded a bunch more of her stock for future use. Thanks for another amazing comment that left me giddy as a schoolboy.
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PrecariouslyPeculiar In reply to Barosus [2020-02-25 05:30:37 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, a wonderfully intriguing thought indeed ^^ And understanding breeds empathy :3
Aww...
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FeynaSkydancer [2020-02-24 04:13:51 +0000 UTC]
A beautiful poem with a lovely picture to go with it! Well done!
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Barosus In reply to FeynaSkydancer [2020-02-24 16:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Feyna! I have gotten such enthusiasm from this it is making me consider going back and revamping more of my older poetry.
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LiterarySerenity [2020-02-24 03:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Goodness, this piece has such a lovely sentiment and beautiful artwork. Bravo!
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Barosus In reply to LiterarySerenity [2020-02-24 16:01:25 +0000 UTC]
I am amazed by the level of reaction to this. I guess when I originally posted it back in 2018 I just didn't have many watchers yet. Thank you so much!
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LiterarySerenity In reply to Barosus [2020-02-24 21:33:32 +0000 UTC]
Now you're a popular amphibian on DA. It must be fun to go back and see all you've accomplished here, and all the friends you've made. ^_^
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grape-smoothiess [2020-02-24 03:05:52 +0000 UTC]
EDWARD THIS IS SO PRETTY TO READ OH MY GOD?? WOAH
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Barosus In reply to grape-smoothiess [2020-02-24 15:57:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness, such enthusiasm! I hardly know what to say. I am totally thrilled you liked it that much. Wow. Thanks!
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Leanndra51 [2020-02-24 02:56:16 +0000 UTC]
A beautiful and spectacular image and poem! I love it!
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Barosus In reply to Leanndra51 [2020-02-24 15:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Lea. I really appreciate that.
This is so old, from back in 2018. I just happened to be looking through my gallery and noticed that back then I had not posted it to the right format. Some of the links were messed up as well. This is the way it should have looked back then!
I am really glad you liked it so much! ^_^
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Leanndra51 In reply to Barosus [2020-02-24 18:04:08 +0000 UTC]
You are so welcome! I love it!
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