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The Unicorn And The VirginShe slips quietly
through the shadows
of the early morning dawn
her bare feet following the path
winding down through the valley
wandering into the enchanted wood
her hair blowing lightly in the breeze
as it trailed down her back
her heart beating with anticipation
golden droplets of moisture
beading her bare skin
will he be there?
will this be the day?
she has waited and waited
for this secret moment
so that she could slip away
to find out for sure
if, yes, if, he would be there
for only a few are able to see him
only a few ever have the chance
to know him
and at last
she enters the glade
and catches her breath
for there he stands
his muzzle dripping water
from the brook at his feet
she casts away any doubt
it is the time
and she is ready
as he turns his eyes upon her
his one horn glistening in the sun
as he morphs
changing into a man
a man but not a human man
a god
she casts her eyes down his golden body
as he too casts his upon her
and they step toward each other
he doesnt turn away
it is the moment
and then with tenderness beyond
anything she had ever known
he enters her and fills her
with his love
they remained joined
until the morning birds
began to sing
and the roosters called
for the wakening
joy filled her soul
as her moaning body
arched against him
turning and caressing
loving and feeling
building up to..to..climax!!!
the first that
she had ever known
and then she opens
her eyes and sees
the morning sun shining
only upon the vision
of a white equine
gliding away into the forest
and she knows
she can never
see him
again
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Comments: 31
TheBarefootpoet1 [2013-08-02 06:52:47 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS so meltingly delicious - I throw myself at your feet, lets do what you wrote!
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SilverWynd [2013-07-13 06:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully told, it reminds me of an article I wrote about the legend once suggesting the possibility of a sexual innuendo in the story.
Horns, and horned beasts are held are held as fertility symbols in many traditions.
So this whole business of virgins encountering a horned creature in the woods is mighty suspicious.
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BenHammonds In reply to SilverWynd [2013-07-13 10:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I always thought so too, as you can tell LOL
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SilverWynd In reply to BenHammonds [2013-07-13 14:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Hunters would sometimes use virgins as bait to try and lure in unicorns, which is reflective of the traditional virgin sacrifice. And there is something very sexual in the idea of offering up young virgins to some primal beast.
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BenHammonds In reply to SilverWynd [2013-07-13 15:17:36 +0000 UTC]
true, I can see that as well
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Banshee-X [2010-04-25 22:35:37 +0000 UTC]
This is based off of a legend?
I love it.
It is very beautifully written, and sweet.
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BenHammonds In reply to Banshee-X [2010-04-25 22:52:55 +0000 UTC]
Hi, yes indeed, they say only a virgin can see or touch a unicorn, so after this meeting she was no longer a virgin and could never be with him again.
Thank you so very much
Ben
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marquieleelathamx [2010-04-24 00:00:34 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful!
Great use of vocabulary, you really painted a master piece with your words.
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BenHammonds In reply to marquieleelathamx [2010-04-24 00:46:53 +0000 UTC]
wow, thank you so very much!!! I really appreciate that, alot!!
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BenHammonds In reply to mmebuterfly [2009-08-27 00:32:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much Im happy that you liked it, please come back and read more as you have time, you are always welcome
Ben
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mmebuterfly In reply to BenHammonds [2009-08-27 02:11:20 +0000 UTC]
I will back!
And I need to learn more about english because I'm brazilian...
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BenHammonds In reply to mmebuterfly [2009-08-27 19:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Brazilian, wow, that is truly great, always wanted to visit Brazil, to see the pretty beaches and travel up the Amazon to see the peoples there. What area are you in? I hope you learn more, Ill help if I can
Ben
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mmebuterfly In reply to BenHammonds [2009-08-28 00:32:21 +0000 UTC]
So,welcome to my country! I'm from São Paulo...São Paulo is like a New York,a lot of people!
You need to know the beaches of North Brazil,is gorgeous!And The South cities like Curitiba and Santa Catarina and Rio Grande do Sul...very beautiful...
The Amazon is beautiful but the Pantanal I guess is more beautiful.I Don't know Amazon yet,I guess is dangerous there because have many animals,snakes...
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BenHammonds In reply to mmebuterfly [2009-08-29 21:43:12 +0000 UTC]
Thats true, I saw a program on Sao Paulo recently on the travel channel, Very interesting place!! I would love to visit!! THe Panatal would be great to see, I would love to go up river on the Amazon and see the native peoples, I come from a area in Texas that has many rivers, swamps and lowlands, I like them.
The beaches would be fun to see, indeed!!
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mmebuterfly In reply to BenHammonds [2009-08-30 02:30:04 +0000 UTC]
Texas is beautiful and the people is very,very lovely!!
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BenHammonds In reply to mmebuterfly [2009-08-30 23:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, it is nice and there is so much different kinds of country here to see. Hugs to you
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