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This is one of the cyborgs from my first story (that I decided not to write, since the story sucked so very much).Related content
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oooh! awsomeness! i love how fluid it's form is- looks very fast and very deadly-
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Yeah, they're deadly as hell! They can feel the presence of both living and mechanic. And they have a bit of precognation and the ability to detect vision, so they know when they are about to be spotted. They're also extremely silent, so if you have one following you, you won't notice it before it's too late.
But they don't kill unless they have to. They follow certain people that is their mission to capture alive, and if there are any witnesses, they mutilate them or kill them in other gory ways just to scare people to stay away from their business.
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oooh just how much are they unfamlur with? cause traping them might b hard that way...
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Hmm... I guess I can tell you now, since I've already decided not to write this story.
Story take place in an enormous human city many hundred years into the past. A bunch of humans took part in a project called "perfect soldier" by their own free will. Scientists had for many years developed a super advanced computer chip that was put inside the participating men's brains. However, a tragic accident caused the project to be put down, and the men got their minds errased. But it would have cost too much on the surgeries to have taken the chips out, so they remained. Five cyborgs were made in total, including the scientist who invented the chip. He had been trading a few samples of the chips with the enemy, but couldn't remember their code since his mind also had been errased. The enemy gave them orders to collect the remaining people who had chips in their heads, and cause a distraction in the human city while they tried to crack the code for the chips. The scientist and his fellow cyborgs went out to hunt those people, but he could not remember how to make a person survive the surgery, so all of them died. But even dead they proved to be useful, just like zombies (only with armor). The chips are sort of like small brains, but they only contained data about how to best murder people and defend themself. Also it contained the ability to feel / read toughts of the people around them. This ability was used to track down the chips, because the people with chips in their heads think in a diffrent way than normal. Since we are living in the middle of a great war, most humans are afraid to die. Anger and fear are two intense feelings that the cyborgs encounter lots of times on their missions, but love is a very rare feeling that makes them really curious. The best way to track down theese guys however, are to track down the chip-head people before they do and keep them under surveilence (did I spell that right?) since the cyborgs will do anything to complete their mission, even get seen. But as I've already said, they kill all witnesses. They also get lured out a few times in the story, because the main character are one of few people who is seriously in love with someone. They don't just get attracted by the feeling, they also protect it. It would be weird to see them fighting to protect the one that is trying to destroy them.
Sorry for long answers
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np XD i don't see why you don't want to write the story- it's a good 1 O.o
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Well, that's not the real story. I just had to have a story behind the badguys in what was supposed to be the first part of the story. The main story sucked big time, it was full of holes and shit.
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Well, the story I have now is many times better. And I can promise that it also has weird and dangerous shit lurking in the shadows
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Not really. But they're curious as hell, and things that they're unfamiliar with attracts them.
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