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Finally I've submetted the first page of something that I plan to continue for some time.
Sorry, but nothing's really happening here, I was experimenting with shadowing and mirror effects (that I screwed up bigtime)
Note that this is many years into the future, the glasses he wears are laser or some unknown stuff. What happens in the center panels is that he turns off the glasses and put them on the table. And what happens at the end is that the levitating chair turns into a bed. Maybe you'll think this is a bit stupid, but who the hell knows what there'll be in the future?

Oh! I also made my character's hair white. The reason for this is that it's easier to see the shading on his face, and it will also be easier to see when it gets stained with blood (much later in the story).

I hope I'll be able to continue like this, don't kill me if I can't.

I also promise that the next page will be less confusing, also Benny will not be in it.

I'm seriously concidering to add ears to my characters, something I've never really done before, because the characters ended up looking more like chimps. And the only ears that actually looked good on some of the characters were the one I copied from Jhonen Vasquez's series. I think I'll be able to make better ears now, so someday they may appear.

Also note that this is the first deviation where I enable "Advanced Critique Encouraged" So please, no "omg", "kewl" or "You rock / suck" comments. But if you can't find anything else to write, then by all means do it.

EDIT: The thingy to the left in the fifth panel is a ball of drinking-water.

Description
Finally I've submetted the first page of something that I plan to continue for some time.
Sorry, but nothing's really happening here, I was experimenting with shadowing and mirror effects (that I screwed up bigtime)
Note that this is many years into the future, the glasses he wears are laser or some unknown stuff. What happens in the center panels is that he turns off the glasses and put them on the table. And what happens at the end is that the levitating chair turns into a bed. Maybe you'll think this is a bit stupid, but who the hell knows what there'll be in the future?

Oh! I also made my character's hair white. The reason for this is that it's easier to see the shading on his face, and it will also be easier to see when it gets stained with blood (much later in the story).

I hope I'll be able to continue like this, don't kill me if I can't.

I also promise that the next page will be less confusing, also Benny will not be in it.

I'm seriously concidering to add ears to my characters, something I've never really done before, because the characters ended up looking more like chimps. And the only ears that actually looked good on some of the characters were the one I copied from Jhonen Vasquez's series. I think I'll be able to make better ears now, so someday they may appear.

Also note that this is the first deviation where I enable "Advanced Critique Encouraged" So please, no "omg", "kewl" or "You rock / suck" comments. But if you can't find anything else to write, then by all means do it.

EDIT: The thingy to the left in the fifth panel is a ball of drinking-water.