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Published: 2008-03-24 01:43:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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This is not my favorite image, I failed in so many tiny ways... I like the alternating light and dark effect on the trees on the cliff, but that's about it.This will likely move to scraps within the next day or to, just hoping for critique, I'm not picky about what. Composition, shading, texture, drawing technique, I do mean anything.
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Aaaagggghhhhh! Perspective issues! T_T
Everything looks nice... its just the perspective
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the river, the tree, the grass, some of the cliff too.
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I do like the composition.
The only thing that stands out to me, is the tree in the foreground. It is a bit unrealistically tall. Perhaps if the branches started a little lower it would look better.
Nice job, nonetheless.
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Thanks!
That tree is one of the many tiny things I failed at, the problem was, I could not get half of the bridge to look right, so I hid it behind the tree... yes I'm a lazy artist...
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Nothing wrong with that. Because from a composition standpoint it works. Its just that the cover-up itself needs a little work.
Learn from it!
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