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monk001 [2020-08-21 16:56:50 +0000 UTC]

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alideadman [2020-08-19 17:59:49 +0000 UTC]

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polarisdreamer [2020-08-10 19:49:06 +0000 UTC]

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Saxophonous [2020-07-26 05:23:09 +0000 UTC]

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Pknight04 [2020-07-25 18:42:23 +0000 UTC]

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Cnidarian-S5 [2020-07-25 12:35:26 +0000 UTC]

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Firestrike2000 [2020-07-25 06:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic. From beginning to end, this really was a great story. From the buildup of Chloe’s obsession to the abrupt end of her relationship with Roberto, this really was a crazy ride. I think you did an excellent job with this story, especially as someone who is not a native English speaker. In this chapter, I specifically loved the puzzle metaphor that Chloe used as it gave an interesting perspective on life as a whole. All in all, amazing job!! Really, truly an amazing story. Thanks so much for writing it for us!!

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Seeker9043 [2020-07-25 05:11:58 +0000 UTC]

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bob123456789123 [2020-07-25 01:52:14 +0000 UTC]

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penguin0404 [2020-07-24 21:16:56 +0000 UTC]

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charisawriter [2020-07-24 15:46:30 +0000 UTC]

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Pusro [2020-07-24 15:32:01 +0000 UTC]

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TheOwl100 [2020-07-24 08:40:00 +0000 UTC]

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cggo [2020-07-24 08:28:56 +0000 UTC]

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swahilimonkfish [2020-07-24 05:43:54 +0000 UTC]

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conswag [2020-07-24 00:41:03 +0000 UTC]

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Nebbebot [2020-07-24 00:27:46 +0000 UTC]

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xombie04 [2020-07-23 23:57:02 +0000 UTC]

This was great One of my favorite stories in recent memory. All the characters were flawed enough to be real and have drama, but also hot enough to distract from the heaviness of the drama. That wasn't a pun or criticism I just feel in storied and real life you can't be miserable all the time. How much do I have to pay you to do some epilogue images. Congrats mate you're a writer

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