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Published: 2004-06-08 01:45:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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How much must I fall,Until I let go?
Let go of this pride that holds me back now
And many tears will fall,
When I die?
Oh won’t it all seem worthless.
Heaven is an empty gate
With no entrance for me.
I’ve checked all over.
Earth is but distant memory
Of loves I’ve lost and
Hearts I’ve shattered.
Hell won’t even look
Through a window
Not even torture is open for me.
How will it come to pass,
Now that I’m gone?
Will anybody think to remember me?
These things that I’ve fought for
We’re all in vain.
Nothing has seemingly changed.
I’ve been around this great big world
And seem all the tortures
That there is to see.
I’ve shadowed it all in my mind
But I can not seem to get
These images out.
I thought I was doing the right thing
By turning from what I know.
I thought I was doing the right thing
Turns out I let it all go.
Everyone that cared for me
Has vanished in hypocrisy
Everyone that cared for me
Everyone that cared for me
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Comments: 5
Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:33:44 +0000 UTC]
'I’ve been around this great big world
And seem all the tortures
That there is to see.'
Shud it be 'seen all..' and cos there is a plural in tortures mebe there shud be 'are' instead of 'is'.
Great piece of work, I can imagine a simple arrangement to the back of these wonderful lyrics. Keep it up.
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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Also you're very much correct. Type-os are the demons which haunt me, since I am always rather quick to put these things on. Thanks again for the comment.
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Ephemeral-Vampyre In reply to Bionic4Pc [2004-11-09 09:37:07 +0000 UTC]
That's ok. I guess you're not the only one whom type-os haunt me as well. On my other user name I have many spelling mistakes. Makes me a bit of a hypocrite tho. Lol.
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littledarkone458 [2004-06-08 01:53:38 +0000 UTC]
this is too good for words but i'll try with the few i know that could describe it
awsome
great
brilliant
unbelievably cool
better than life
Sweeter sugar
still can't think of any that could even explain how good this is great job
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awkward-insanity [2004-06-08 01:46:45 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. I'm sure with a tune and a couple of chords this could flow real well. Cute idea for a song.
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