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Published: 2004-11-30 09:30:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Whenever I see your face,I really don’t know what to do now.
And whenever you’re in this place,
My heart skips a beat and my hands shake.
From the color of your eyes,
I can see the love inside you now.
And whenever my hope dies,
I just think of you, it reminds me.
:Chorus:
You alone,
Can control,
Nothing makes sense without you.
In your eyes,
I see the light,
I don’t know what I’d do without you.
:End Chorus:
Ever since I’ve known you,
You captivated all my dreams now.
Girl you are so lovely too.
Your skin is like that of an angel.
From the color of your eyes,
To your hands that hold my heart now.
And whenever my love flies,
To you, it will find it’s path home.
:Chorus:
(fin)
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Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-30 09:33:46 +0000 UTC]
'From the color of your eyes,
I can see the love inside you now.
And whenever my hope dies,
I just think of you, it reminds me.'
That's my favourite bit I'm afraid correction princess has to spring into action tho hun...you can be let off cos its so late
Last stanza: there are 's's on the end of 'your' and 'love'. Don't think they should be there but if they are - re-correct me. Lol
I like it.
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