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Bionic4Pc β€” The Muse
Published: 2004-11-24 09:11:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description When you were created God broke the mold.
Creating two of you would be too bold.
From your hair, your eyes, your lips, and your feet,
A beauty of yours cannot be beat.

To Earth I was sent to proclaim of your sight.
Not to write in a book, just shine the light.
Before entering this world you were but a dream.
There would be no beauty like yours, as it did seem.

Now that you’re here, I can say with His grace,
That from this point on, no one will take your place.
I will continue to preach until you have passed.
For the world can now see true beauty at last.

And when you are gone, your memory will strive.
For the world will be thankful that you were alive.
For now that my job will be finally complete,
I will go back to heaven and next you there’s my seat.
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Comments: 8

Milliana [2004-11-26 08:22:22 +0000 UTC]

i actually like this one! it flows nicely and i bet your muse would be grateful.

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Milliana [2004-11-27 06:56:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much. I appreciate your acceptance. this one was very easy to write, as were the many poems that were dedicated to this special person in my life.

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Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-24 14:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Its beautiful. From the heart. Should 'mold' be 'mould'? I don't know. Anyway, the rhyme scheme is good and I'm liking it a lot.

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-24 18:17:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear that you like yet another one of my poems. As far as the mold mould thing I think it can be spelled both was, it's an English vs. American thing I think.

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-24 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear that you like yet another one of my poems. As far as the mold mould thing I think it can be spelled both was, it's an English vs. American thing I think.

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Ephemeral-Vampyre In reply to Bionic4Pc [2004-11-25 08:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah kewl. That means no corrections!! Woot!

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Witchy-Faline [2004-11-24 09:28:42 +0000 UTC]

It's really good.. I like it..

your really talented..

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Witchy-Faline [2004-11-24 18:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Yet another great compliment, thank you so much! I don't know about talented, but it was nice to read, none-the-less. The inspiration of these poems is to really be thanked. She was my muse.

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