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Bionic4Pc β€” The unfortunite truth.
Published: 2004-10-12 08:07:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description In my heart there lies an answer,
In my soul there lies the pain.
A comfort not yet spoken,
And a love not yet proclaimed.

Somewhere deep inside,
There lies an angel yet to sing.
For a devil has consumed me,
And only cries are what it brings.

The mask I wear shadows me,
From the pain which lies beyond.
But the pain I slowly suffer within,
Has become but a sacred bond.

Oh why can’t I just face the truth,
And tell her just how I feel?
For the truth would only bring confusion,
And her heart I would not steal.
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Comments: 7

rocker-chick562003 [2005-08-31 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey you,
I like this a lot. Wow Im off to read more of your stuff!!!!

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rocker-chick562003 [2005-03-20 22:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Frank,
This is really really good. I love how you express emotions. Keep it up! Blank toad.
Sam

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Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Apart from the title spelt wrong (shud be unfortunate) I can't fault this poem. Truly from the heart and a good rhyming technique.

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you again for the wonderful comments. I appreciate the corrections too. You will be known has my correction princess. (Just kidding....unless you like that title....but if you dont just kidding)

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Ephemeral-Vampyre In reply to Bionic4Pc [2004-11-09 09:42:11 +0000 UTC]

No no, thas cool! I'm the correction princess! Spelling mistakes beware! I will vanquish all of you. hehehe!

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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:42:41 +0000 UTC]

hehe, well then it shall be now and for ever.

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littledarkone458 [2004-10-23 04:09:06 +0000 UTC]

this is sooooooo awesomly good that i mite actually have to look up words in the dictionary to express how beautiful this is
but i am too lazy and i doubt u want to read all of the rambles

anyway

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