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Published: 2004-10-12 08:07:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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In my heart there lies an answer,In my soul there lies the pain.
A comfort not yet spoken,
And a love not yet proclaimed.
Somewhere deep inside,
There lies an angel yet to sing.
For a devil has consumed me,
And only cries are what it brings.
The mask I wear shadows me,
From the pain which lies beyond.
But the pain I slowly suffer within,
Has become but a sacred bond.
Oh why canβt I just face the truth,
And tell her just how I feel?
For the truth would only bring confusion,
And her heart I would not steal.
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Comments: 7
rocker-chick562003 [2005-08-31 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Hey you,
I like this a lot. Wow Im off to read more of your stuff!!!!
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rocker-chick562003 [2005-03-20 22:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Frank,
This is really really good. I love how you express emotions. Keep it up! Blank toad.
Sam
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Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:35:53 +0000 UTC]
Apart from the title spelt wrong (shud be unfortunate) I can't fault this poem. Truly from the heart and a good rhyming technique.
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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you again for the wonderful comments. I appreciate the corrections too. You will be known has my correction princess. (Just kidding....unless you like that title....but if you dont just kidding)
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Ephemeral-Vampyre In reply to Bionic4Pc [2004-11-09 09:42:11 +0000 UTC]
No no, thas cool! I'm the correction princess! Spelling mistakes beware! I will vanquish all of you. hehehe!
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Bionic4Pc In reply to Ephemeral-Vampyre [2004-11-09 09:42:41 +0000 UTC]
hehe, well then it shall be now and for ever.
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littledarkone458 [2004-10-23 04:09:06 +0000 UTC]
this is sooooooo awesomly good that i mite actually have to look up words in the dictionary to express how beautiful this is
but i am too lazy and i doubt u want to read all of the rambles
anyway
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