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I got her characteristics all pretty much done.She tries to fit in, but is too much of an odd ball most of the time. Very energetic, but shy to look weird. That and she has a side that goes totally nuts if she is comfortable enough, or if she is in a mood where she doesn't give a fok any more.
She resembles the mechromancer Gaige from BORDERLANDS2 in some aspects. Lot of inspiration was taken from that character.
She is an lightning Anarchy ninja.... nuff said.
Can do all kinds of cool lightning power things yadda yadda yadda. For now she wields two electric sai and two shuriken with which she punches fools. (predator style)
DOWN TO THE BEESWAX!
I don't think she is finished yet tho. I feel something is off but I can't really tell what.
First off I need a name.
And I need some feedback on how I can make her NOT A BLOODY RAHKSHI. Any other feedback would be nice too.
I will certainly post updated versions of her with your suggestions implemented. If I am still not happy we will do it again. Until we have a full on character that is forged by all of us.
Any ideas will be read and taken into consideration.
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Comments: 51
Curtthebard21 [2015-03-24 20:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done. Just a quick question though, have you ever thought about making a Reaper-like creature?
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BioRockDude In reply to mrnuubstar [2013-07-28 18:12:19 +0000 UTC]
like a vaki?
naaah to limited in neck movement
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mrnuubstar In reply to BioRockDude [2013-07-28 19:58:09 +0000 UTC]
Well, i was going to say yes, but i've seen you've already fixed it.
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chief100 [2013-07-28 01:12:54 +0000 UTC]
sweet. I'd post my MOC's, but I just got finished displaying them in my room.
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tht-AZN-guy [2013-07-27 15:42:12 +0000 UTC]
Hmm im not sure why but the name Zemya fits with me on this one. idk just the loud colors on this moc scream Zemya, but thats just me.
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CASETHEFACE [2013-07-27 00:15:36 +0000 UTC]
i got to say the shape of her is spectacular i can definitely see a lot of the borderlands 2 style with the different colors have you ever thought bout making a vehicle like the vehicles in borderlandsΒ
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ethan-k793 [2013-07-25 00:31:11 +0000 UTC]
I think the colorsΒ could be differently distributed (maybe making black more of the dominant one?) glad to see you make more mocs man!
also as for the head, ive seen you make some pretty sweet custom ones, I trust you can do that for her.
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shadowghost09 In reply to ethan-k793 [2013-07-25 02:25:36 +0000 UTC]
holy shit those colors! the body! the face fucking beautiful!!! XD
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ethan-k793 In reply to shadowghost09 [2013-07-25 03:42:18 +0000 UTC]
I didn't say remove the colors just play them differently! I like the face but he wanted a different one so I just suggested ._.
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shadowghost09 In reply to toa-requis [2013-07-25 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]
uh bro biorock doesn't know of my existance nor does he care so why did you mention me?
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shadowghost09 In reply to BioRockDude [2013-08-20 18:26:35 +0000 UTC]
you do not know nor do u care to thats my point biorock
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budster248 [2013-07-24 20:31:47 +0000 UTC]
How about Tesla for a name? Try using a Orange nuva shoulder armor as the face mask and give her a hoodie cloak.
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BioRockDude In reply to budster248 [2013-07-25 07:36:35 +0000 UTC]
tesla would work... but it is kinda obvious tho
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budster248 In reply to BioRockDude [2013-07-25 20:47:44 +0000 UTC]
eh, first thing to come into my mind.
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BioRaidos [2013-07-24 19:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Name, name...
How about Trixity? Like electricity,ol since she does lightning tricks.
Abou other parts i have no possible idea.
Looks preety awesome.
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Takanuza [2013-07-24 18:24:42 +0000 UTC]
i only have one critique with this and that is the lower legs. its to bulked up those piraka legs make it look fat I think just use the rahkshi legs instead even though you used it in the back but it'll look nice with front rahkshi legs so it will be thinner. but all around good moc. name idk
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BioRockDude In reply to Takanuza [2013-07-25 07:40:04 +0000 UTC]
they resemble big ass boots so it is intentional
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Takanuza In reply to BioRockDude [2013-07-25 17:29:27 +0000 UTC]
oh ok now i see it. then never mind. lol
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CelticSpartan [2013-07-24 17:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Very cool, purple parts are so hard to find, love the color scheme, and how you use both old and new parts. Ninjas don't usually try to stand out like that but it does have its advantages, it gives her individuality which is good. Could try a Vaki head if you haven't already. How about Lilith for a name?
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BioRockDude In reply to CelticSpartan [2013-07-25 07:44:19 +0000 UTC]
she is also punk man,
she likes the ninja turtles too ya know she has sai like rath, and all the colours of the others
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LegoMetal44 [2013-07-24 17:34:09 +0000 UTC]
im surprised that u didn't give her a robot arm. if you need a head design id say look at mine, it resembles a ninja. and a name, Casandra Β Β
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BioFlashRock [2013-07-24 16:32:38 +0000 UTC]
my advice keep the rahkshi head but give it a hair idea like what we saw with dettex
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and another thing the upper arms look thin as hell add a bit more to it or sumthin and then your good
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Shorjok [2013-07-24 16:10:11 +0000 UTC]
I fya don't want her to look like a rahkshi, don't use a rahkshi head. Simples.
Make a custom one.
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BioRockDude In reply to Shorjok [2013-07-25 07:45:25 +0000 UTC]
and that is the less easy part, making a good female custom head design
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Shorjok In reply to BioRockDude [2013-07-25 15:05:58 +0000 UTC]
Not if you try. Just use lotsa greebles.
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BioRockDude In reply to Shorjok [2013-07-25 15:47:56 +0000 UTC]
tried something with core hunter his head... looks bitching
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Shorjok In reply to BioRockDude [2013-07-25 20:40:54 +0000 UTC]
Look forward to seeing it.
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Brian-Nuva [2013-07-24 14:38:18 +0000 UTC]
use the mask from Hali Marhi, I think it will look cool, and as for a name, I got nothing yet.
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decptibot [2013-07-24 13:50:36 +0000 UTC]
What about taking one of those T-pieces, a bit of HF armour, and one of those blue visor things from the Phantoka sets and using that as a head?
For names though, I got nothing.
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PrimusRulz [2013-07-24 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]
May want to try a new head design if you want her to look less like a Rahkshi.
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stonelink204 [2013-07-24 11:22:44 +0000 UTC]
damn you make me want to get back into mocing if i only had the pieces love the design and color schemeΒ
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