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BioRockDude β Lightning Anarchy Ninja Project part 2
Published: 2013-07-28 18:47:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 6087; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 6
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Made some sketches on how she looks, the body is far from done in the drawing state.Update:
-changed the head (still not sure but I like the core hunter head, requesting advice for ways to add hair, or other head designs if you think it will improve)
-slight change in the torso, tubes now feature, for the connectors that are her shoulders (previously blue) will be made so that they do not flonk about (I will cut of a part of a limb to make that happen)
-legs... the lower legs are pretty much the way I want em, not so sure bout them upper ones tho, all feedback will be looked over tho.
-added a "to thought responding tentacle pack", not sure about this, but in can be used for various purposes.
Best name so far :Trixxy
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I am thinking about a robotic arm, will probably build one and try it out.
Please post pictures of design ideas.
And if you have anything from a comment to a nitpick, please tell me.
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I know.
It just takes a while
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just apply pressure.Β
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i found out how to make the body... my head hurt after figuring it out
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I'm impressed how you can combine Bionicle and your drawing talent into a giant globe of awesomeness.
Basically I'm saying that you're good at what you're doing.
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for the uper leg you could try a more... propper desing, Perhaps? I'm not too sure about the view on it and I do apologize, but here is a link on wich you can look at the upper leg:
fav.me/d5qipow
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I agree with BioFlash. It's an interesting look.
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ya know when ya said bibs on turning the core hunter head round and using that as a head use that for when the whole battle mask thing aint on
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I love the hand piece for the center torso. It reminds me of Gali Mata, and how she had one as well.
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I think you should try to make a custom mask, then if that doesnt work, use the current mask. I feel like the head is pretty disproportionate for a female moc on this one.
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ya know that you kinda stole my idea right, look in the comments
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Please refrain from using your anger. I commented that under 30 seconds, i don't waste my time looking at all the comments.
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That is because of how I did the hair. I fixed it now. looks flippin monster.
I also need to burn that drawing of her face, the new one is far superior.
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soo awesome!!! the drawings are cut too.
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lol, the tentacles can be used for "various" purposes, very funny
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Lynna x trixxy tentacle triple 'X' action?Β
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My opinion:
- Neck is too thin, maybe you can put a tire there?
- The arms seem rather... empty. I think they could be more fleshed out (could also use some more color; compared to the rest of her body).
- Despite there being a 'claw' in the turqoise handconnector on the front (Chest), it feels quite empty... and it really bugs me for some reason.
- The light blue on her backsideΒ seems a little out of place, but I get that those can't be found in turqoise. I'd suggest to just leave them out and use black instead.
- While I have no problem with short hair I think (MOC wise) long hair would look better on her. But now I'm starting to nitpick...
The rest: Love the head you've chosen for her, very original. Lower leg/foot design is very interesting, I like the shape of it.Β The colorscheme is very funky, not a lot of people use it. Overal pretty good, but not entirely there yet. Also, nice drawing off of her, she looks like an interesting character.
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you should make a custom face on a white inner glass mask, so that when she takes the mask off, you put on the custom face
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well you definatly have something down! if your still unhappy with the head you could go with a 1 eye helmet thing?
also i think the origional legs were good when it came to the whole ninja look. the colors look awsome in my opinion now that there placedd slightly different.
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Honestly, I like the rahkshi head better. You could do something like build goggles or a visor on to one to make it more unique! Oh, and how's Zalara sound for a name?
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I have now picked a name.
Trixity Myles
but her friends call her Trixxy.
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Hey the name suggestion, did you change the name or type it wrong? 'Cause it was Trixity. Just wondering.
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Oh ok use it as you want it.
I m just glad I helped.
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I really feel like a lazy commenter these days. I usually don't have anything to say other than how much I like the whole thing. :I
I really like this MOC and where it's going but I don't really have anything else to add. x3
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Is there a relationship between the last 2 mocs because they share the same color scheme.
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Nvm I just notice it's a ninja team :/
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Also, I have a name suggestion, none of that faggy shit.
Call her Aniseed. Or Liquorice.
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fuck, man, FUCK
I really like this
and that corehunter head actually looks realllll good.
just, got
dang man
nice one.
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Personally, I think if you found a way to flip the mask it would look better. More feminine and Β stuff.Β
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cut the stubs of a hf body
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Ok, I'm assuming an X-acto knife? or something else?
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actuallu I used an automatic woodsaw
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I'd give her a bit of shoulder armor, as for a robot arm,celticspartan.deviantart.com/a⦠simple and works, full range of motion, that's the only bit of armor I've been able to get it to work right with though.
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Hmm... i say since she is a ninja, why not give her a giant shuriken/ninja star thing-i think that would fit her a lot-possibly use the tahu mistika blades. thos or the generic dagger pieces. As for the upper legs, im not sure but instead of the long black amour pieces, try using them in a size lower in orange possibly, if not then i guess the black works ok. as well as the hair, why not use the the shoulder spikes found on tarix but in black or orange ? otherwise it looks pretty good
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the core hunter head looks abit weirder. maybe you should use the 1-eyed rakshi head?
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OOOOOVER DONE TO FOKKIN HELL
then it took a stop at the china shop
AND THEN IT EXPLODED!
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