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Alright everyone, Time for some fan participation.I need a monologue from twilight in my next topic where she tries to understand what happened to her in the Tub Time comics. She would be thinking out loud recounting and trying to understand what happened to her. This monologue will be overheard by another character, so it needs to reveal some of the details of what happened.
Put your ideas in the comments, or show your support for others ideas. The best one makes it into my next comic, with collaboration credit.
Oh, and have some wet maned twilight
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I could come up with an alternative caption...
Twi: "Spike, take a letter. Dear Princess Celestia, it seems that one of your youngest subjects has a multi-magical talent, although one that is particularly dangerous. Hers seems more geared towards pyromancy. In an incident involving an inadvertent triggering of this talent, I might have sustained severe burns if not for the quick action of Spike and a bottle of spring water. I would like to see if an evaluation group from the Canterlot Mage Academy could be brought to Ponyville, as well as flak jackets, nomex suits, and a lot of ABC fire extinguishers. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle."
Alternatively...
Twi: "Rarity...I don't think this hair gel holds up in summer heat."
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LOL... I need to do a twilight letter in one of these comics
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I'd also imagine what any of the other mane six would do if they got "sneezed" on by Spike. They'd have to be teleported back by Celestia or Luna...
Pinkie: "How embarassing, I didn't have any jello!"
Dash: "I didn't think I'd get onto the Wonderbolts THAT way..."
Rarity: "Yet another thing we shall never speak of again."
Applejack: "Applebloom had better not mention a word of this..."
Fluttershy (catatonic): "Oh...my..."
And for the ultimate in mind-trips...
Spike: "What happened might be embarrassing enough...what horrifies me is...HOW?!"
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I could just imagine the expression on fluttershy's face.
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Twilight: I really hope the princess doesn't tell anyone. And I think I may need to talk to someone about this.
That's something I think she would say.
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Twi: (manical laugh) hehe..its ok twi...nopony knows hehe...the princesses wont tell anyone right?...Right...? hehe (hiccups from nerves)
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This would be a great ending to the monologue
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{Twilight} Oh my gpsh! did celestia.. just try to do that to me.... IN THE BATH! im faltered and all but, i am her student!
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"I don't know what to do! There's no book on taking a bath with royalty!"
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If I had more than one panel to work this in, I could see Twilight ripping books off the shelf looking for guidance.
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Next Grand Galloping Gala, the Princesses are going to have a fully stocked open bar.
After all, they can't count on the Mane Six to trigger Murphy's Law EVERY time, can they?
Twi: "I still can't believe there's no book on taking a bath with royalty..."
Spike: "There wasn't until recently. This just came from Unicorn Point Publishing. A letter of congratulations, your first royalty check, and a copy of...'Taking a Bath with Royalty?!"
Twi: "...."
Spike: "By Twilight Sparkle and their Royal Highnesses, Princesses Celestia and Lun..."
Twi: "GIVE ME THAT!!!"
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LOL!
So many great ideas, so little time before I have to pack up my computer for the move
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Only Twilight Sparkle could write a book while blitzed out of her mind...
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Ohmygosh! ... I... hottub ...Princess Celestia... So cheerful! ... So creepy! ... And I'm like a newborn to her! ...
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Yeah... definitely creepy
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"I saw the princess naked...um...come to think of it, when hasn't the princess been naked? Except for the crown and the boots, but still..."
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"I... I... I feel so awkward! The princess... the water... the other princess? Spike! From now on, pepper is strictly banned from this household!"
"awww man."
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This must somehow contain the phrase "The princess...I got all wet!"
Or...something of the sort. XD
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I wonder how I would work that in...
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"I just wanted to see the princess...but now I'm all wet...and I've seen her in the TUB, and what the HAY did she MEAN that 'the fun has been doubled'?"
Sweetie Belle: "Seeing the princess made you all WET?"
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Yes, that definately has the plausible deniability I like.
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"Okay, Twilight. Just calm down. The Princess didn't mean it THAT way when she said 'the bathtime fun has been doubled'. Or did she? No, she wouldn't. She's royalty. But still! OMYCELESTIA WHAT JUST HAPPENED?"
idk just idk
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This is a great ending to the monologe
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i'm just gonna stare at wet mane twilight until i come up with something good...
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Wet mane all the ponies.
Twilight: "Okay Twilight, just calm down. Surely the princess didn't mean that when she said somepony she cared about. Even though she had a strange smile... That wouldn't go away... And Luna seemed perturbed..."
Something like that?
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>Surely the princess didn't mean that when she said somepony she cared about.
That definitely needs to be worked in.
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Make sure to include the emphasis, that's what sells it.
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"It's okay Sparkle, so what if Spike's flame drop you in Celestia's bath. At least she wasn't mad, she was happy...very happy... and wasn't surprised or embarrassed by Luna. Wait, dose she and Luna... together... fun doubled... with me... IN THE BATH!?"
Twilights mind working faster then her mouth, I wonder where that train of thought lead her.
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I can definitely see mys self using some if not all of that
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ROFL... just one line....
"...so THAT'S how Equestria was made..."
>_> XD
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Now i might be a bit confused but she was sent the first time through spike not a spell right? that was the same green flame that sends letters and it looked different from the teleportaion spell she used at the end.
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Yep, She was sent by Spike's flame initially, and teleported back using her teleportation spell
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"Out of all the ponies in the world I had to run into with that spell, why did it have to be Princess Celestia? And in her bathtub no less! Plus, that glance of her's was just... Ooh, where did I put that keg of hard apple cider?"
But quote aside, Twilight doesn't really look that much "wetter" after her experience. Perhaps you could add a large water puddle instead of just the one at the end of her tail or add water droplets that are still clinging onto her.
Now, Godspeed soldier! Make us proud!
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Yeah, I am definitely thinking of making Twilight look wetter in the final comic. It's something I will put in when I do the final assembly, so I can have the puddles persist between frames.
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"Spike... Pepper... Bathing Princesses... Celestia's body all wet and soapy... And why was she smiling like THAT! For that matter what was Princess Luna doing there?"
That is what I think her reaction would be right after leaving Celestia's and would also lead to the most questions of any pony near by that heard her. Thank you for considering my entry.
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It definitely has elements I am looking for
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Me gusta.
Sorry I couldn't help it, spanish being my native language and all.
It's funny how hard it is to tell Twilight's mane being wet or not, since it's usually really straight xD
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That's why I went heavy on the wet effects... otherwise, it's really hard to tell, other than her hair being a little more droopy than normal.
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Yeah I figured 
Question: is the wet effect just a toned down color, or does it have something else to it?
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Its just aqua blue, set to 30% transparency, layered above the mane's layer.
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OOOOOoohhh... lol I thought you just picked a lower tone of every color in the wet parts XD I keep forgeting about transparency ¬¬
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Dear Diary,
Damnit to the sorrel hells! It was the perfect moment for me to admit my lover for Her. An attempted long-distance teleportation spell dropped me into her bath. My mind froze up before I could tell Her, then Luna came in. I panicked and teleported home.
At the least, I've proven my aptitude for long-distance teleportation.
:V
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And as Twilight suddenly, through a message read to her by Spike sent from the Princess, she remembered what had happened the other night and, mentally locking it away, stated, "That's the last time I try one of Pinkie's Adult Cupcakes."
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