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The General FMA OC Guide.

This guide covers only the most basic stuff.

Here's the list of the tutorials we are working on:

-OCxCannon: Make it Work Out.
-Cannon - OC Interaction.
-Alchemists.
-Chimeras.
-Homunculous.
-Military Personel
-Civilians & Others

And more... feel free to suggest anything.

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The characters belong to us, group founders. Some of the pictures found in this tutorial were drawn by the other founders. See if you can tell.


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Bitter-Cherry In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 22:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Good!

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VampireNerd13 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 21:48:58 +0000 UTC]

That was helpful, acctually ^_^ It made me think aobut some things that I never consider -- like birthday, where they live, and body type ^_^ Now I just have to get around to making my application... xD

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Mari-m-Rose In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 20:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Muy buen trabajo! Es bastante informativo y divertido xp XDDD Rei mucho! Cuanto esfuerzo Priss, te felicito C:

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spritekun21 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 20:56:16 +0000 UTC]

hahaha I found that very informative and entertaining. Especially with the pictures. Great job! I was very visually well done and put together.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to spritekun21 [2011-10-23 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Many might notice their OCs "suffer" from some of these things, and I think that making it sound funny will get a better reaction from them.

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DragonKnightMirren In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 20:16:49 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, and love the way you planned it out. It is very imformative and well, a great guide. I am thinking of justing the club. What is it like? I agree with Kenzo-Angel.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to DragonKnightMirren [2011-10-23 20:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Well, as I've said before I've seen the other OC development groups try and fail, get filled with whiny sue owners and die a little more as the months go by, I've been part of them so I've learnt from their mistakes, but the biggest problem was the lack of a system, no organization. And we've tried to make the club seem a little intimidating or elitistic so only people that is serious about this joins, although we don't really waste our time with lazy people or 12 years olds that can't handle critique well. To stay in you have to actually work on your OC and not just post pretty art, in fact you have to wait until you've been reviewed before we accept art. Once we have a big group, just like now we close join requests for a month to work on them all and get them to the next level, of course some things may have to change as the club grows. There are 4 levels, we work on different things every level, and there are many other features that we have yet to release, but these things take time, we're just getting started.

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DragonKnightMirren In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-10-23 21:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah, right, that sounds good, I might just join. I am quite good when it comes to giving critique and I try my best to accept in responce.

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Kenzo-angel2010 [2011-08-21 19:57:24 +0000 UTC]

>.> What I don't understand is why Ed, Al and Roy seem to get all the love? What about people like Scar, and the Homunculus (if they're still around in their story), or even someone like a random military operative, like Alex, or Havoc or Ross, or any other female or male, or god forbid father? They still need love too!

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Kenzo-angel2010 [2011-08-21 20:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Scar gets love too~ Remeber Lika.
But like I said before, we're just covering the most basic sueish issues, and you know how that goes. LOL Well the homunculus are evil... not even human... so well. Still, some do pair characters with them, thing is it rarely makes sense. Anyhoo, that is something we will be discussing in our next guide. OCxCanon.

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Kenzo-angel2010 In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 22:59:25 +0000 UTC]

I remember now that you mention it.
Sadly I do know how that goes One of my friends just seems to pump out Sues by the second, and she never seems to understand...
Sueish characters may be a problem, but have you ever looked at the fact that if you make a Sue it's fun to kill them off? I mean really, it's like a million voices cry out in relief once you do
And I look forward to all of your guides

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Kenzo-angel2010 [2011-10-23 20:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Gawd yeah I've met people like that, it's hard to believe they don't notice or simply don't care.

LOL XD You're so right!

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BewareTehFluff In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 19:29:09 +0000 UTC]

great information! It's awesome!

Lolis for Alphonse
>,< if Al wasn't such a Shota we wouldn't have to pair him with loli women!! //shot

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to BewareTehFluff [2011-08-21 19:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Hahahaha aw but just look at him at the end of the manga! I'm pretty sure he loves boobs as much as any other FMA male. :,D Even tho he doesn't say.

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BewareTehFluff In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 20:29:21 +0000 UTC]

^^ np!

but but but...! okay fine! he looks a little bit more more manly but still a Shota X'D

EVERYONE LOVES BOOBS! okay not everyone but still!

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CorgiStump In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 19:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow this was really helpful and informative I did find a few grammar mistakes here and there though.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to CorgiStump [2011-08-21 19:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And yeah, I'm aware... I'll try harder next time, but it's a pain since I'm the only one who can translate. Since most of them founders speak spanish and their english is not perfect, the guides were first written in spanish. Hard to find them all and Word is no help. ;v;

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CorgiStump In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 20:02:02 +0000 UTC]

oh they were in Spanish first? That does explain a few things then. And the grammar mistakes aren't that big of a deal, I was just pointing them out to you in case you weren't aware of them and wanted to fix them. And you're right, word is no help! After spell checking crap on word for my fics; I still find a shit load of mistakes later on after I post them!

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to CorgiStump [2011-08-21 20:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, if it was all up to me, they'd be in english from the start, oddly enough it seems to be easier for me to translate from english to spanish and not the other way around. (I is a translashun student.) But yeah, I know they're there, but typos are hard to find.

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CorgiStump In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 20:32:34 +0000 UTC]

English to Spanish is in fact easier to translate then the other way around. It's the sentence structure of Spanish that causes this. And yeah typos are hard to find. But anyways, good job on the guide. I'm still trying to motivate myself to actually sign up for the group and fill out the application form XD

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to CorgiStump [2011-08-21 20:39:31 +0000 UTC]

I should probably adapt the text and not traslate it. Because yes in fact one can't do it "literally" since sentence structure is so different... and spanish is much richer in many ways, so when you translate you have to simplify a lot. I do think, however, everything is very accurate. At least in the first sildes. <.<;;;

Sadly, I have to accept my english is better than my spanish in many ways. I suck so bad.

Oh you should, it's gonna be fun.

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CorgiStump In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-22 00:22:41 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah. And I guess i should do it since I just got this fancy ass new tablet. lol yeah I'm gonna do it XD

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SquirrellyWrathGrl In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 19:11:40 +0000 UTC]

<3 this is very useful and thank you so much! <3

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to SquirrellyWrathGrl [2011-08-21 19:39:34 +0000 UTC]

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B-Griveros In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 19:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Sos super ultra grosa haciendo los flash ;3;

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B-Griveros In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 19:04:41 +0000 UTC]

>w< Me encantΓ³ cΓ³mo quedΓ³

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Brassassin In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 18:43:41 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome and so super informative, I love it! Now I just need to rework my OC and all will be well.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Brassassin [2011-08-21 19:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That's the spirit! º¬º

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Brassassin In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 21:47:19 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, luv!

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BDLock In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 17:33:53 +0000 UTC]

his /her head falls of cuz its to heavy!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to BDLock [2011-08-21 19:12:40 +0000 UTC]

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BDLock In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 22:35:59 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Raeberry-Draws In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 17:14:23 +0000 UTC]

This actually did help out quite a bit. I'm personally looking forward to the homunculus guide XD. Keep up the good work, all of you.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Raeberry-Draws [2011-08-21 19:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Soon. And of course we will!

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AveriaAlexandros In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 16:12:01 +0000 UTC]

You wanted feedback? You'll have it

First, it's actually spelled "canon". This is what you would call a "cannon". I know I use "cannon", but only to make fun of... a certain type of fans.

Plus, there's this whole "BUT MAH OC EEZ A SUPAH STATE ALCHEMIST" thing. Being 13 means NOTHING for a FMA Suethor; I would point this out.

Lastly, the font's a bit too small, but let me see if it's just Opera.

Every drawing in and after the 3rd page is pure gold. Will we ever see them separately?

Oh, of course, what will be the next one?

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to AveriaAlexandros [2011-08-21 19:11:43 +0000 UTC]

That's hardly feedback you my bootiful troll. XD I dunno, I've seen it written in both ways, I'll keep it in mind for the next guides tho.

LOL Did you know Wendy Bellrock is not only a mechanic but also the best state alchemist evah? And the youngest too because she is 15 seconds older than Ed.

Hmm no that's DA's fault, if you click download you can see it with better resolution.

Probably. ewe

OCxCanon most likely.

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AveriaAlexandros In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-22 06:07:10 +0000 UTC]

"Did you know Wendy Bellrock is not only a mechanic but also the best state alchemist evah? And the youngest too because she is 15 seconds older than Ed."
LAWL

"Hmm no that's DA's fault, if you click download you can see it with better resolution."
I DID hit "Download", that's why I wondered if it was just Opera xD BTW, I forgot to check. Crap.

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vera-san In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 15:17:54 +0000 UTC]

lol the Priscy and Jen derp faces.

Anyway, this was a very handy guide. Thank you for making this; Lord knows a lot of people need it. I'm looking forward to your Chimera guide, I've always wanted to make an OC Chimera but I want to go about it the right way.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to vera-san [2011-08-21 15:41:31 +0000 UTC]



Hehe it was fun~ Yeah many do.
Ah, good... you can get started with the human part and his or her BG story, family, childhood, etc. Those things help create more realistic OCs. Now, I hope it doesn't take too long, everything is already written, we just have to put it together and add pics... Ah and I have translate it.

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vera-san In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 16:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Yep. It's sort of ridiculous how insane the FMA OC characters have gotten. People have to remember that making overly sad/dramatic/creepy/violent childhoods or stories isn't always more interesting. I personally like characters I can relate to more than ones who have obscure lives. (I still love FMA though, haha)

And that's great! I'm looking forward to it. ^.^

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Lalikaa In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 12:47:18 +0000 UTC]

The ffffuuuu Al made me laugh. As well as all the derp faces. And Armstrong!Ed is just beautiful. xD

I love all the body types too. While Arakawa herself has admitted her love of drawing big muscly men and super curvy womean, that shouldn't mean OCs have to be that way too. The chibis at the end just made me laugh. xDD

Erm... and I'm just letting you know this, but isn't FMA based off of Britain? Since all the signs are in English (even in the Japanese version/how Arakawa draws it) and the constant drinking of tea? I know there was an interview somewhere about it.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Lalikaa [2011-08-21 15:31:40 +0000 UTC]

LOL Well it's true, Loli OCs for Al everywhere.

:3 AH! But even there yo do get to see different bodies.Just look at Mustang's team. Now it may be harder to see in women since they appear less, but they differ as well. Of course as you can see most of us let our OCs have big bewbies. XD Tee hee. Guess who started it.

Girl down there read my mind lol. v

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Lalikaa In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 17:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, really? I tend to stay away from the OC scene, so I've no idea. I do know that Ed often gets paired with other state alchemist though. So many OC state alchemists who have automail. x_x

Very true. xD I was just quoting something she said in an interview because I'm a dork like that, haha. And you know, FMA is a shonen manga, so when there are women, the constant boobage and miniskirts is to give fanserive to the boys who read it. xD And I mean, I guess they are your OCs, you can give them boobs if you want.

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Super-Sailor-Star In reply to Lalikaa [2011-08-21 14:47:27 +0000 UTC]

I actually think that Amestris was supposed to be a mix of England and Germany. I think that what Arakawa said was that she based things off the Industrial Revolution (specifically in England). But the use of the Furher title and the country's forgein relations seems kind of similar to Germany (Amestris and Drachma's non-aggession pact seems to be similar to Nazi Germany and Russia's during WWII).

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Lalikaa In reply to Super-Sailor-Star [2011-08-21 17:44:50 +0000 UTC]

That sounds about right, yeah.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Super-Sailor-Star [2011-08-21 15:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Well you read my mind lol. No to mention the location, Amestris is landlocked, England... is surrounded by water. While Germany is not completely land locked, it's much more similar. And in all honesty,the fuhrer fact plus the foreign relations thing, weigh much more in comparison. And wirting in english was probably just easier, and more would understand. Also, I'd say the Ishvalan issue could be compared to the germans messin' with the jews (?) ... ah and pure blood amestrians having blond hair and blue eyes like the Armstrong family is important too.

Yet again, based of doesn't mean identical, it could be based off of both. But I really think Germany would be more adecuate.

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Lalikaa In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2011-08-21 17:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I think my comment about this was a bit confusing. xD;;

I meant that I thought it was based off both Britian and Germany... Britain for the language and revolutionary time period, and Germany for the politics and geography.

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eljaouhari55 In reply to ??? [2011-08-21 09:15:57 +0000 UTC]

oh priss, what did i tell you about stealing those girls' bra's?

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NoVaNoah In reply to eljaouhari55 [2011-08-21 09:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Mira trusted in her sensei when she said "Oh, it's bad buckled sweetie... lemme help you 030"

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eljaouhari55 In reply to NoVaNoah [2011-08-21 09:31:11 +0000 UTC]

NUUUU
DONT STEAL THE BRAAAS
derp
well, no point in stealing my bra so im safe!
i think

now i need to go into hiding.

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