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BlackHatGuy β€” Demons Run

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Description Note: This poem doesn't have punctuation in the transliteration.
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R3dOkt0ber [2021-10-20 00:29:41 +0000 UTC]

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D3usEx [2019-12-01 20:26:26 +0000 UTC]

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MelancholicParry [2015-09-20 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]

I can't see any mistakes in "sun", have you corrected it?
Looks extremely awesome btw!

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Romana12 [2014-05-09 00:49:13 +0000 UTC]

That's just insane... I love it. I can write "Bow ties are cool", but nothing that awesome.

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johnjames460 [2014-04-28 19:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Could someone point out to me where the word "Sun" Is misspelled? I'm very lost haha! But I LOVE this!Β 

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anotherprettyvein [2013-12-06 03:25:48 +0000 UTC]

I adore the glow on this, it just fits the language brilliantly.

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MasterAresius [2013-09-30 15:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Is it the whole poem?
I seem to be somewhat lost after a short while...

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the-muffin-master [2013-03-21 23:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Man, this would be perfect for a tattoo, wouldn't it? I was planning on doing it, but after people pointed out there's a mistake (and I can't find it cuz I forgot how to write in gallifreyan), I'm stumped, haha! But awesome work!

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Cluelessly In reply to the-muffin-master [2013-08-12 17:20:54 +0000 UTC]

In the word 'sun' the first letter should have three lines and doesn't.

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SariahLiliy [2013-02-24 23:55:33 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME

I love how it's laid out. Took me a minute to get the hang of following one phrase to the next, but I got it in the end! So cool!

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The-Jelly-Princess [2013-02-03 17:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. This is beautiful.

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Ringthehedgehog [2012-12-21 14:17:13 +0000 UTC]

what does it say if you translate the writing on the cradle in the episode? (i would do it myself but i'm still trying to learn gallifreyan.)

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Ringthehedgehog [2012-12-21 18:06:43 +0000 UTC]

My version isn't the official BBC version, they just use random cool-looking circles.

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Ringthehedgehog In reply to BlackHatGuy [2013-01-01 23:57:52 +0000 UTC]

oh ok. but wat would be the closest translation to your version. i think it would be funny since theirs doesn't actually translate because they are just circles.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Ringthehedgehog [2013-01-03 20:26:06 +0000 UTC]

haha that would be funny, but they're just not close enough to be able to translate. It's like trying to translate a bunch of lines into Englishβ€”maybe you see something that looks like an I or a T or something, but most of it's gibberish.

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Skribe-of-Sirkles [2012-08-03 11:49:44 +0000 UTC]

great gob with the circles I only found one mistake and that was the S in sun. It doesn't have any lines.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Skribe-of-Sirkles [2012-08-03 15:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah haha I messed that one up. Good work transliterating!

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AshTarts [2012-06-15 06:54:59 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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psion0027 [2012-06-13 22:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Can I put this on a T-shirt? I created an account just so I could ask.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to psion0027 [2012-06-14 00:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go ahead!

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psion0027 In reply to BlackHatGuy [2012-06-14 16:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome dude, thanks!

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psion0027 [2012-06-13 22:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Can I put this on a T-shirt?

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Kyron0098 [2012-06-12 16:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey, nice Top Hat, also good pic.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Kyron0098 [2012-06-13 11:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Midnight4200 [2012-04-30 20:54:26 +0000 UTC]

WHY ARE YOU THE COOLEST PERSON EVER.

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Baizoo [2012-04-12 03:22:51 +0000 UTC]

This is great. I love how it glows.

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melting-stars [2012-02-23 11:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Pure awesome sauce!
The Doctor would be proud.

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alvaro84 [2012-01-10 04:38:51 +0000 UTC]

It took some time to recognize the greatness, but this, this is brilliant!
The way you handled repetitions, it's beautiful and elegant like a well-written program.
I love it.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to alvaro84 [2012-01-10 23:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!

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BrickByBoringBrick12 [2012-01-07 19:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Simply lovely :3

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pencilhappyred [2011-12-14 03:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Where can I find the rest of the grammar guides to writing in Gallifreyan? How do you put sentences together? btw, this is so cool! I really want to learn how.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to pencilhappyred [2011-12-14 03:57:03 +0000 UTC]

A more comprehensive guide will be up sometime around Christmas, until then I'm afraid I don't have the time.

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Cerperi [2011-12-14 00:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Sorry if i ask... but what does the bigger circle (after the first demons run) stand for? And the smaller one? I've just read yor guide, it's awesome *w*

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Cerperi [2011-12-14 01:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Counterclockwise from the bottom, they are "demons run", "when a good man goes to war", "friendship dies and true love lies", "night will fall and", "drown the sun", and "the dark will rise". I think.
This poem is confusing because a bunch of stuff repeats, so I had it loop back on itself a lot.

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Taryuna [2011-12-09 11:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Am I mistaken or did you miss three lines in the s of sun?
Trying to wrap my mind around your Gallifreyan writing system. It's really neat.
Love what you did with the connecting lines to only write each part of the poem once.

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BlackHatGuy In reply to Taryuna [2011-12-09 11:58:16 +0000 UTC]

By golly, so I did! You're the first one to point that out
Thank you!

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adeiacty [2011-11-20 19:54:13 +0000 UTC]

You should do the peg doll's poem too..

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BlackHatGuy In reply to adeiacty [2011-11-21 01:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Good idea! I shall, if I have time... ha. Me having time. Perhaps when I'm in York.

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adeiacty In reply to BlackHatGuy [2011-11-22 03:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Wonderbar! Ich kann nicht warten!

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RandomAnimeGirl42 [2011-11-05 18:37:59 +0000 UTC]

LOVE THAT POEM.

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