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Published: 2015-04-12 10:01:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2135; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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After experiencing more and more Mary Sue OC´s in the Creepypasta Fandom , I decided to do a "small" list on how to create a good OC. So people if you need help then dont be afraid to comment something.Ok let´s start:
First of all , there are many types of Mary Sue´s in this Fandom , the well known ones are the "depressed Sue´s" and of course the "Cliché Sue´s"
The depressed Sue´s are of course the whiny ones , that cry their Eye out the whole time , that gain no love at all , and are totally depressed , nice looking but think are ugly and useless and always want to kill theirself. Come on guys...it´s really getting old now
And of course the Chliché Sue´s that have too much from the other Characters , that are so Cliché that you just roll your Eye and skip to the next OC , it´s especially annoying when you roleplay with one...
Here some Tips for creating a good OC:
- Do NOT create a Neko , it´s the CREEPYpasta Fandom goddamnit , Neko´s are NOT scary NOT in any way , they actually look ridiculous
- Do NOT create an immortal OC , OC´s should have strenghs and weaknesses so it´s fair if you fight against them
- Do NOT ship them with a Canon Character
- Do NOT create an OC that´s able to beat everyone , they should atleast NOT be able to beat Slenderman or Zalgo , because that IS overpowered
- Try your best to not make it look like yourself , Hair/Eyecolour is ok
- Do not use the typical Background Story for an OC , bullied , abusive parents and rape (which is only used for shock factor , VERY awfully poor and just disgusting , and of course insulting to the people that actually went through this horrible time) are the mostly used ones , please come up with something new
- If it´s a Slender Being or Demon , do NOT make it too overpowered
- Do NOT choose a "Father Figure" for your OC UNLESS it actually makes SENCE (ex: Slenderman and Sally is a GOOD chosen one) , if you choose a "Father" simply because you want one for your OC then think again "HAHAHAHALOLOLOLOLOOOOO IF YA PIISSS MEH OFF I WILL ZEND FATHA ZALGO AT CHUU!!"
- Do NOT make everyone fall in love with you , this is especially annoying in Roleplays
- Do NOT make them look too beautiful , they are supposed to be creepy NOT pretty it´s CREEPYpasta
- Do NOT make them nice or caring UNLESS they are Happypasta´s
- Do NOT create a mixture of Creepypasta and Happypasta , how THE FUCK would that work!? CP and HP is something completely different
- Create a realistic Background Story
- And of course do NOT create a Rip-Off OC , explains itself pretty much
Ok people I hope I could help you a bit... if you still dont know what type of Creepypasta you want then here are some:
- Humanoid Creature (example: The Rake)
- Slender Being (example: Slenderman)
- Psychopath/Serial Killer (example: Jeff the Killer)
- Happypasta (example: Splendorman)
- Rabbit OC (example: Skipper)
- A Ghost (example: Sally)
- A Videogame Pasta or Virus (example: BEN Drowned)
- Demon (example: Lord Zalgo)
- Little Girl/Boy (example: Sally and Lazari)
- Proxy (example: Masky and Hoodie)
- Cannibal (example: Eyeless Jack)
- Clown (example: Laughing Jack)
- Animal (example: Smile Dog)
- A Character based of a Movie (example: cursed alice in wonderland character or something like that)
- A character who turns out to be a brutal murder but seems innocent (example: Sonic.exe and Pinkamena)
- Pokepasta (example: Lost Silver)
- Ponypasta (example: Pinkamena and Rainbow Factory)
- A living Corpse / Zombie (example: Klicker)
The best thing is still to chose what YOU fear the most , I hope this helped you, and now have fun creating a good OC
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My character is a man who runs a cult who kills anyone because they think they are freeing them and drawing a symbol in their blood the leader thinks hes the chosen one meant to kill everyone in the world with a knife he thinks is blessed by his god he also leaves notes encoded in binary that reveal pieces of his information he leaves for the cops and he usually wears a mask with a 0 for the left eye and a 1 for the right eye and a long smile stretching from one side of the mask to the other
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My Oc, Has one red eye and one parsley red eye from Hitting her head to hard and The eye color is still Normal * Climbing a mountain * Would it be Considered Cliche if here eye has a popped blood veils in one of parsley 2 eyes?
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I've gave it some thought and wanted to finally create a creepypasta OC of my own, albeit I can't write for shit yet with such a block; maybe I guess I can start with a profile ref sheet that includes a summary of the intended storyline. I'm going for an insane serial killer doctor type, Yes, I'd like to have certain details be as realistic as possible. Some questions that are of my concern are these: Can my killer doctor OC be a Slenderman proxy? (I even have an intended mask for them to wear) Many fan-canons seem to depict proxies as no more than teenagers, but my doctor must be in the mid-20's to 30 if they're gonna be originally certified (adding up all those medical school years post-college).
Second, are you sure about the Background Story? My OC's background does contain one case of bullying in their life, family dysfunction, maybe even backdoor forms of abuse (let's just say someone I know was abused in such way which left her confused and hands-tied about it for years 
Third I've intended to write my creepypasta story in some kind of diary journal style, basically "doctor notes," so it's obviously gonna be 1st person, them documenting things in their life overtime (and their tone gradually hinting their killer intentions), albeit I'm concerned the doctor OC may sound like they're talking a lot about nothing (what with writing guides insisting "Show, don't tell"). I'd tell more specific details, but I'm concerned about someone else seeing them and writing such story theme ahead of me.
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Tbh this Journal is pretty old and most of the points I stated are not valid anymore
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Oh well, most of the guidelines sounded pretty fair...
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This is some really good tips I have for the moment just one CP OC and i unfortunately think he falls to be immortal and overpowerd
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That doesn't instantly make him a Gary Stu tho
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Okej, i hope he is not a Gary Stu ^^' I was wondring if it is alright with you that i leave a link to my OC and hear your opinion about him? But only if you want and have time of course ^^
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Thank you tobbe-totte.deviantart.com/art…
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I like the idea with an angel born in hell really much
Tho I think his character design could be a slight bit better
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Thank you so much Im glade you like the ide Is it something in his design that dont seems right?
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Well I think the purple T-Shirt doesn't fit
But I guess that's all a matter of opinion
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Oh okej. Well i dident know what color i should give to that shirt when i created him years ago. So i just took what i was thinking would fit ^^
But a really big Thank You for taking the time to look at my OC I really appreciate it
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Yes yes yes! Finally my sanity is reappearing in my mind. Anyways, I agree, I hate it when some oc is always depressed or always beating and killing my oc. Like seriously, I had to overpower Silly Stephanie once just so she could kill the other oc and I could just end the rp. Now, my oc is a rotting zombie, and she isn't that pretty. I'm also still working on her story and design, I've decided to change her eyes with just small pupils, and not different sizes. I realized that most wouldn't understand the fact that her pupils being different sizes are supposed to be related to a concussion. Eh, oh well. I also figured since most ocs and Canon characters wore hoodies, I decided to make her wear a good ol zip-up sweat-shirt.
Her back story is getting intense at the moment. I've already written 15 pages on Google docs of her entire life and I'm barely at her age 9. She died and committed her first murder at 13. Ehhhhhhh, I still don't like her age. But, since I'm 13 myself, and I know how 13 year olds act in general, it's easier for me. Heh, Mary-sue creators will never understand the struggle of a true oc.
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that sounds like a pretty good oc there!
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Thank you. And she isn't shipped with BEN anymore. I found out that my other OC, Jake's Dead, is perfect for her. The racist people will have to deal with it because he's African American and she's white. Haha XD
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lol nice to see a dark skinned oc
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Yeah. No one ever sees them anymore. So I felt like I'd go and make one. And surprisingly it's doing well
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PREACH!!!!! At last! Someone made it clear once again!
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XD thanks
But I add some things later
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Okay. I wanted to tell that my oc, is eyeless. He cries blood and tears every time he breaks down, and this kinda affects his strength due the loss of blood from his damaged eye sockets. Even without eyes he can still see. Not as well as he did before but oh well. Now he is just more valuable to bright lights and hits in the face. His teeth had been slowly sharpened due the fact that he was forced to start eating mostly human and raw animal flesh to live. So his teeth are sharp because of the process. His nails are black and sharp like claws. This happened because he damaged them badly while he was inside the Silver Mountain Asylum, scratching the walls of his cell. (an Asylum of my own imagination! ^^). He then let them grow wildly. He has the habit to growl amd even roar while hunting his victims or is injured. He behaves like an animal while eating and fighting. When he wants to run faster he usually goes on his 4s and runs like an animal. Fastly. His skin is has a grey tone. Not so light, neither so dark. He is NOT immortal. He is NOT a demon. He has NO special powers, only the fact that he is stronger that the usual man, but I don't think that is such a big deal. Which means that he uses his feet, boots actually, to finish a wounded victim, or even attack. His arms are strong enough to brake a jaw and damage arms or legs badly. His claws sharp enough to slash a throat, or pierce flesh. His hair are dark black and his eyes used to be dark brown. (these are my hair and eyes color. Everything else on him is completely different than the actual me! 
What do you think of my oc, Black Mamba?
(sorry for long comment and my crappy grammar xD )
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Its quite fine but they grey skin and eyeless being reminds me on eyeless jack and BENs eyes were also taken out with a spoon
But else it seem well developed
And I dont care about gramar or spelling mistakes because we ALL make them xD
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Thank you for your opinion on the matter!
I really appreciate it!!
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......das ist kein how to, das ist ein how not to xD
Nein, ernsthaft. Ich stimme in jedem Punkt zu, aber damit vertrittst du nur eigene Meinungen und das klingt nach "Ich weiß es besser!"
Gib lieber tipps wie man vorgeht und WARUM man gewisse Dinge beachten sollte
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Diese Tipps sind auch noch nicht ganz fertig , habe die nur hier gepostet damit ich weiß wo sie sind und Leute sich das schon mal anschauen können
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keep those tips in mind when creating one , simply :I
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I have a happypasta I adopted that was made by someone else's cpoc ^^
The cpoc made a doll from their dead bodies and the happy lesbians inhabited it xD
woo!!
And of course I have Rachies -huggles-
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I BROKE THE RULES AND WON WOOOOO!!
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Now lets see if I can shit out not only a new species but an alicorn oc too xDD
People hate alicorn ocs -braces self for hate-
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yea because ost of them are overpowered bitches xD
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My alicorn isn't over powered though xD
She spends all her time locked up in a filing room (not literally locked shes free to leave but there's just so much work to do) making sure patents are in order
A lot of people dislike her if she refuses their patents because they infringe on already made ones and she doesn't know the main six
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idgaf about mlp , and its overrated c:
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I think its cute
I like a lot of kids shows like mlp, steven universe, etc
They have some really good messages and remind me a bit of kids shows from when I was younger
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Im a proud Sonic Fan muhahahaha >:3
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mlp isnt something I watch obsessively like some people but if I've had a rough day or my condition is acting up and I need something stupidly cheery to brighten things up then its good for that
#casualviewer
Things like Dexter I watch obsessively xD Love me some Dexter
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well I watch Sonic the whole day cuz im a Sonic fan that totally makes me a coward because all sonic fans are immediately cowards :I XD
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I don't know much about the sonic fandom tbh
I wasn;t much of a gamer as a kid cause ... I dont remember xD
So I never really got into sonic back then and stuff
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