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So was the *SLAM* his hands and arms hitting the table for dramatic effect or has he just added another black eye to that collection?
He's not really handling this with any sort of aplomb.
Panel 5, he looks deranged, and dangerous, this seems appropriate.
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I'd like to call that move a "full body flop." The majority of the impact I think was taken by his arms, but there was definitely some face in there too.
Also, I'm going to make a point to rewrite the rest of this chapter that it eventually leads to that exact scene.
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You don't know where i've been Lynn, you don't know where i've been!
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Looking up?
Not for the worm.
And yes, Lynn's 1st sentence. Β I think you meant, "I thought you said that it wasn't you."
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When I initially wrote it it sounded okay the other way, but I think you're right. The "it" makes it flow better!
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I think there's about to be a whoooole lot of doubling down before that might happen.
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Still loving the series!
Helpful note - I think there was a typo in Lynn's first sentence - I think you swapped the place of "wasn't" and "you". It doesn't read right as it currently is.
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Ahh bummer! Thanks for the heads up though, I just fixed it!
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I'm glad I could help. It seemed like it would easy enough to fix
The story is really great and I enjoy it a lot. I can't wait for more.
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