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Published: 2005-12-03 08:11:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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So yeah. Last summer I started a comic, mainly about everyone's favourite 'Berto Boy! And his sidekick Jamie! This is the first page. Obviously, it's not done, what with the lack of text and colour and all, but I wanted to put some of them up any way, to help spur me on to finishing them.I should also probably re-size them. Any comments from the penut gallery?
Page Two
Page Three
Page Four
Page Five
When I make with the colour and text, I'll move this to scraps.
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Comments: 3
Love the comic! I notoce most people just review the first or last page. I think I'll review them all just to be different! I'll probably run out of ideas so the next couple of reviews from me will probably be unimaginative. Oh well. It'll still show up on the stats so who's complaining?
Anyway, the comic is great and I hope you continue with it! And, you know, add dialogue. That too.
uh . . . that's it.
Peace.
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(this comment applys to all four pages!)
Firstly I really like the unfinishedness of them, it draws you in. Possibly, page three could do with a fence and some more background, but whitespace is alright if you aren't worried about colouring. However, because you're planning to colour, that always seems to require finished backgrounds for some reason. I suppose it's because the whitespace looks too white when the page is coloured? I don't know, I'm rambling.
I love the layouts, they don't get stale, and you use different styles to create action and movement within the image well. I should be able to express myself better than this, but I just can't seem to today. SO excellent work, I love it.
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Thanks much! I do <3 the speep. ^.^
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