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Published: 2016-03-14 16:45:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Charcoal, watercolour pencils, Marker, pen, and pencil.Related content
Comments: 26
First of all.
This piece lured me to say something about it.
It was something somewhat unpleasing to the eye but at the same time it made me question on what it is and how it should be approached.
Never have I ever seen such a spectacle this unique.
It's both confusing and at the same time calming. It made me think (lol which I don't usually do unless needed).
More or less a true conceptual art you have here.
I also love the crumbling part in the middle where in there's a fine line that holds that thing or tree. A great combination of blue, black, white and the dust brush of black.
If you added a bit of the blue somewhere on the sides of the tree it would have made it looked like it glowed, but this is already enough to make someone comment or give their insight.
You can really see the beauty in the chaos in this piece.
Great job!
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Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my piece!
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No problem!
I just love nightsky theme paintings 
Hoping to see more!Β Β
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my newer stuff is all critiquable, if you're ever in the mood to critique again I'd love to hear more of what you think
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This is one of the rare pieces where a lot of different mediums are used. I feel like this is unique in the sense that the texture created were using drawing marks instead of the usual collage of material such as fabric.
There is also a good vision in this piece and it is original quite original in terms of how the piece gives of the vibe of feeling of both summer and autumn/winter with the choice of colors.
However there are some area that I believe could be easily improved in order to leave a stronger impact on the audience. With the current silhouette of the tree I couldn't tell what it was until I read the title of the piece. Trees really don't look like a blob, it is a good idea to do some studies and use reference when drawing the tree.
One more suggestion would be to increase the contrast of the land (white area) to the trunk of the tree. There is very good contrast on the upper part of the tree with the black. However the trunk and the roots of the tree just kinda off blend together with the land. Maybe this was intended, however if it was not it will be better to add more contrast to bring out your focal point (the tree)even more.
Overall it was a very interesting piece. The use of multiple medium on the same piece gives off a unique feel to it. I would look forward to seeing more amazing pieces such as this.
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Thank you for your critique! First one I've ever recieved
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Wow, so many different materials make a really nice effect.
I like the colours in this one.
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Thank you very much
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You're very welcome.
And not at all, sometimes we manage to make things that we are genuinely proud of, it's a good thing.
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Yeah I've got a real boost in confidence the past few days from the praise my newer pieces have been recieving
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Being able to produce things like this using traditional techniques on paper is deserving of praise.Β Β
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Thank you very much that means alot
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Thank you very much, your input is always at the top of my list when it comes to importance, Means alot friend
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You are always welcome,viewing art is a passion of mine,for me it is always about learning From other artists,but also to inspireΒ
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I know exactly what you mean
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Thanks, means alot
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Yeah its fun but hard to get used to
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This is clearly something to eat, a little reminiscent of the work of Kurt Cobain!Β Β
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i wasnt aware Kurt Cobain did art, thanks for letting me know! And thanks for commenting
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keep up the good work!Β
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