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Published: 2003-11-07 08:17:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 53
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Isn't sleep beautiful? The thin line between consciousness & unconsciousness.Existence. What is it all about? Love? Sex? Money? Drugs? What the fuck is it all about? Oh no, don't answer me. I don't want to know what you think. I want to know what I think. What do I think? What do I think.
I don't think. I can't think. I can't.
Reality is the crowd. The people. The people with no faces. My existence is nothing but a number. A fucking number. So is yours.
Wake up. Fall asleep. Wake up. WAKE THE FUCK UP!
Who am I? What am I? Who are you? Do you care? What is your number? What is your identity? Who are you?
Physical pain. A sweet sweet drug. Ecstacy is love. Lust. Draw me a portrait. Of your Happiness. She's all you have left. She is all you want to be.
Music. That's what it is. It's in your blood. But you can't see it. But you can feel it. Yes you can. Don't deny it. Don't deny me.
Go to sleep.
I'll see you soon. & I'll stop crying.
[Pixies - Where Is My Mind?]
Comments: 2
The strange thing about this is that I like the narrative and the abstractly jaunted style of writing a lot more than the subject matter. It reads like a prescription, no tangents, short sentences. It reads like someone on the brink of something strange, and it reads like someone who cares.
I don’t like “existence is nothing but a number”. It’s been used again and again, so many times that the numbers have all evolved personalities of their own and the statement has lost its effect. If you’d switched it somehow, made a tiny play perhaps, maybe state how many digits your number has…
I love the last two lines. That’s where it reads like someone who cares.
Nice stuff.
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Wow. Thank you for your detailed comment. Honestly, I don't remember reading “existence is nothing but a number” anywhere. Hmm...
This piece is unedited. I didn't want to look through it again because I wanted it to be as raw as possible.
Thank you once again.
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