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Published: 2010-03-24 05:44:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 763; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description No sound. No sight. No thought. Empty. Blank. White. Black.  Beginning. End. Done. Start. Goodbye. Hello. We are not done.

Falling, falling, falling, falling, stopped. Dead. Alive. Falling, falling, falling…

Voice. Sound. White. Black. Blue. Falling, falling, falling, stopped. Alive. Scream. Voice. Sound. Loud. Empty. Done. Dead.

Red. Sight. Voice. Sound. Blue. Falling, falling, falling, falling. Alive. Wonder. Curious. Red? Blue? Sight? Voice?

Hello. Voice. Sound. Blue. Goodbye. Gone. Done. End.

Falling, falling, falling…

Stop

Alive?

Rising

Rising, rising, rising…

Alive. Sound. Sight. Sound. Blue. Red. Arise, arise, arise…

Smile. Sight. Red.

Feel Thought. Think. Sound. Sight. Arise, arise, arise…

Hello. Start. Smile. Red. Arise.

Laugh

Arise

See

Arise

Hear

Arise

Feel

Arise

Arise

ARISE

And now we are done.
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Comments: 11

Blaze7the7Cat [2010-04-10 00:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Like it!

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bones1925 In reply to Blaze7the7Cat [2010-04-10 00:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Blaze7the7Cat In reply to bones1925 [2010-04-10 00:16:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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mesatired [2010-03-26 02:08:27 +0000 UTC]

I love this, the repetition, the fragmented sentences... It is very well done and I was completely pulled in by it.

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bones1925 In reply to mesatired [2010-03-26 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mesatired In reply to bones1925 [2010-03-26 05:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!^^

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Nymphe-AR [2010-03-25 03:52:58 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why I was so absorbed in this one Unique, indeed :] Couldn't stop reading once I started haha..

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bones1925 In reply to Nymphe-AR [2010-03-25 05:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Caity-Kitten [2010-03-25 03:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very unique. I liked it, and I like the way it was repetiative but you changed things up with style and formatting.

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bones1925 In reply to Caity-Kitten [2010-03-25 05:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I had hoped that the way it was done was a good way to present it.
I'm glad you liked it!

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Caity-Kitten In reply to bones1925 [2010-03-26 04:18:32 +0000 UTC]

^^ Your welcome

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