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Published: 2010-03-24 05:44:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 763; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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No sound. No sight. No thought. Empty. Blank. White. Black. Beginning. End. Done. Start. Goodbye. Hello. We are not done.Falling, falling, falling, falling, stopped. Dead. Alive. Falling, falling, falling…
Voice. Sound. White. Black. Blue. Falling, falling, falling, stopped. Alive. Scream. Voice. Sound. Loud. Empty. Done. Dead.
Red. Sight. Voice. Sound. Blue. Falling, falling, falling, falling. Alive. Wonder. Curious. Red? Blue? Sight? Voice?
Hello. Voice. Sound. Blue. Goodbye. Gone. Done. End.
Falling, falling, falling…
Stop
Alive?
Rising
Rising, rising, rising…
Alive. Sound. Sight. Sound. Blue. Red. Arise, arise, arise…
Smile. Sight. Red.
Feel Thought. Think. Sound. Sight. Arise, arise, arise…
Hello. Start. Smile. Red. Arise.
Laugh
Arise
See
Arise
Hear
Arise
Feel
Arise
Arise
ARISE
And now we are done.
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Comments: 11
mesatired [2010-03-26 02:08:27 +0000 UTC]
I love this, the repetition, the fragmented sentences... It is very well done and I was completely pulled in by it.
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Nymphe-AR [2010-03-25 03:52:58 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why I was so absorbed in this one Unique, indeed :] Couldn't stop reading once I started haha..
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Caity-Kitten [2010-03-25 03:12:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very unique. I liked it, and I like the way it was repetiative but you changed things up with style and formatting.
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bones1925 In reply to Caity-Kitten [2010-03-25 05:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I had hoped that the way it was done was a good way to present it.
I'm glad you liked it!
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