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Published: 2003-07-20 01:13:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description It feels cold against my palm
I hold it so softly

Something so small can make such a difference

I want the pain to end
To stop these unbearable thoughts

Something so small can make such a difference

My hand trembles slightly as I press it against my scalp
My finger curls around the trigger

Something so small can make such a difference

I take my last breath
Creul images flashing through my mind

Something so small can make such a difference

She pulled the trigger
Sweet crimson wetness dripped down the cream walls

Thoughts that once tainted her mind
Now taint the walls
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Comments: 7

kamelin [2003-09-01 05:26:02 +0000 UTC]

What a powerful ending line . . .
She had OCD, didn't she.
And I know That's not My ending fate . . .

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braceletsofsmoke In reply to kamelin [2003-09-01 05:27:43 +0000 UTC]

OCD?

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kamelin In reply to braceletsofsmoke [2003-09-01 05:30:27 +0000 UTC]

obsessive compulsive disoreder. If you have many obsessions, as I do, you worry and worry and worry, and make up horrible things that never happened until you're forced to believe they have. It terrible, and I have it

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braceletsofsmoke In reply to kamelin [2003-09-01 05:33:43 +0000 UTC]

oh right....sorry about that.....

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kamelin In reply to braceletsofsmoke [2003-09-01 05:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, love, it's okay

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repechi [2003-08-05 02:18:03 +0000 UTC]

yes i love the line: sweet crimson wetness dripped down the cream walls.....
great words

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fuhrer-matt [2003-07-20 01:59:01 +0000 UTC]

wow, good ending! its really quite sad, but its very good writing!

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