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O hai, Mark.

convinced me to join this. : D Here's Mark. I'm actually still developing him, so this should be a good exercise. Tell me if there is any inconsistency or ambiguity or UNGODLY TYPOS with his character description.
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Name: Markus (Mark) Lagunov
Age: 17
OIT-027

Mark is not a pleasant person. He’s a narcissist, has a one-track mind, and extremely cold towards others. He shows no mercy in battle, something that has garnered him some negative criticism from other trainers. Still, he pushes his Pokemon to the limits in the hopes of being strong enough to crush any opponent. He is extremely critical of his Pokemon and others. Most of the time he can be found training or studying strategies as he takes battling very seriously. He feeds on praise and attention, although he is hesitant to give any in return. If he compliments you, it’s probably back-handed. For all his douchebaggery however, he does get lonely quite easily. He prefers the company of those who don’t challenge him or push his buttons (a rare thing to find). There is some good in him, though...
...somewhere.
I think...

Likes: himself, nature, cold weather, ice types, strong pokemon, fighting and competition in general, fruit smoothies, history.

Dislikes: losing, grass types, being called out on his BS, his huge ears (which are always hidden behind his hair), most things actually.

-Pokemon-

Brutus - Powerhouse and means business, but otherwise well-mannered and loyal to a fault. Brutus obeys Mark without much thought, even if it’s a reckless move. He admires Mark for his callous nature and thinks that it is a necessary attitude in order to grow strong. Usually accompanies Mark outside his Pokeball.

Hadrian - Mark’s first Pokemon and raised from a Swinub. Big softy. Is pretty oblivious of what goes on most of the time. Stays in his Pokeball most of the time due to his bulk. Never deny him food. You will regret it.

Fedora - Mama of this testosterone factory. Usually keeps to herself and obverses from afar but still very protective of Mark and his team

Chuck - Dense and slow-witted but means well. Cheerful and likes to help even if he ends up just getting in the way. Wears a green collar with a zipper on the end.

Pabst - Sly, cunning and exceedingly vain. Not a trustworthy Pokemon in the slightest. Likes to sneak around and start mischief. Wears a blue polka-dot banana.

Pig - The youngest and most inexperienced member of the team. Lots of energy and cheer that usually never gets to see the battlefield because Mark rarely ever lets him compete. Mark regards him as weak and a nuisance and would prefer to trade him, but no one ever seems to want to take the rambunctious Mankey off his hands.

Description

O hai, Mark.

convinced me to join this. : D Here's Mark. I'm actually still developing him, so this should be a good exercise. Tell me if there is any inconsistency or ambiguity or UNGODLY TYPOS with his character description.
--

Name: Markus (Mark) Lagunov
Age: 17
OIT-027

Mark is not a pleasant person. He’s a narcissist, has a one-track mind, and extremely cold towards others. He shows no mercy in battle, something that has garnered him some negative criticism from other trainers. Still, he pushes his Pokemon to the limits in the hopes of being strong enough to crush any opponent. He is extremely critical of his Pokemon and others. Most of the time he can be found training or studying strategies as he takes battling very seriously. He feeds on praise and attention, although he is hesitant to give any in return. If he compliments you, it’s probably back-handed. For all his douchebaggery however, he does get lonely quite easily. He prefers the company of those who don’t challenge him or push his buttons (a rare thing to find). There is some good in him, though...
...somewhere.
I think...

Likes: himself, nature, cold weather, ice types, strong pokemon, fighting and competition in general, fruit smoothies, history.

Dislikes: losing, grass types, being called out on his BS, his huge ears (which are always hidden behind his hair), most things actually.

-Pokemon-

Brutus - Powerhouse and means business, but otherwise well-mannered and loyal to a fault. Brutus obeys Mark without much thought, even if it’s a reckless move. He admires Mark for his callous nature and thinks that it is a necessary attitude in order to grow strong. Usually accompanies Mark outside his Pokeball.

Hadrian - Mark’s first Pokemon and raised from a Swinub. Big softy. Is pretty oblivious of what goes on most of the time. Stays in his Pokeball most of the time due to his bulk. Never deny him food. You will regret it.

Fedora - Mama of this testosterone factory. Usually keeps to herself and obverses from afar but still very protective of Mark and his team

Chuck - Dense and slow-witted but means well. Cheerful and likes to help even if he ends up just getting in the way. Wears a green collar with a zipper on the end.

Pabst - Sly, cunning and exceedingly vain. Not a trustworthy Pokemon in the slightest. Likes to sneak around and start mischief. Wears a blue polka-dot banana.

Pig - The youngest and most inexperienced member of the team. Lots of energy and cheer that usually never gets to see the battlefield because Mark rarely ever lets him compete. Mark regards him as weak and a nuisance and would prefer to trade him, but no one ever seems to want to take the rambunctious Mankey off his hands.