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"Hi, I'm Hawkpaw. Who are you?"The white apprentice spun around, her green eyes widening.
"I—I'm Whitepaw."
She eyed the apprentice. He was just a little older than her, but he didn't look it. He had big, sturdy muscles that seemed to jut out of his pelt, threatening to rip through it at any given moment. He had a dark brown-striped tabby pelt and a snow-white chest. She blinked in surprise. She didn't see how such a dark brown could suddenly fade to white in one piece of fur. She couldn't help but shrink down under his pale blue gaze.
"It's okay," he mewed, obviously sensing her discomfort. "It's a truce, remember? We can just talk."
Whitepaw let her shoulders relax. There was no use getting worked up over nothing, at what was just her second gathering.
"So you're from Thunderclan, right?" The brown apprentice tilted his head to one side.
She nodded. "And you're from…Riverclan? You're the rouge kit, aren't you?"
Hawkpaw bristled. "Hey!" he growled. "Your clan has been known to take in outsiders, too!"
Whitepaw flinched. "I—I didn't mean it in an offensive way!" she meowed. "My own father was born a kittypet, you know."
Hawkpaw's muscles relaxed, those large, brawny, too-big-for-his-age muscles.
"Sorry," he apologized. "I didn't mean to get snappish there. I just hate when cats hold it against me that I'm not clanborn."
"My father was always made fun of, too," she told him. "Firestar brought him to the clan when he was a kit. No one trusted him for a long time, even after he was a warrior."
"I never knew my father." Hawkpaw's icy blue eyes grew wistful. "But I know he was a warrior."
'So you do have warrior blood!' Whitepaw bit back the realization. It didn't matter where a cat was born. If he proved himself to his clan, he was worth what any wild warrior was. That certainly had been the case with Firestar, who didn't have a drop of warrior blood.
Hawkpaw glanced over to where the medicine cats were chatting near the Great Rock. Cinderpelt and Leafpaw were on the edge of the crowd.
"Do you know Leafpaw?" Hawkpaw asked suddenly.
"Sort of, yes." Whitepaw actually barely knew the pale brown she-cat, who hadn't shed her kit fur yet. She had been apprenticed a little more than a moon ago, and was shy and illusive. Her best friend was Squirrelpaw, a fluffy ball of neverending energy.
"She's friends with my sister." Hawkpaw flicked his ear toward a golden she-cat sitting next to Leafpaw. "I'm pretty sure Mothpaw wants to train as a medicine cat."
"Why can't she?" Whitepaw asked with a shrug.
"Mudfur says he's waiting for a sign." Whitepaw wondered why Hawkpaw's eyes glimmered with mischief when he said "sign."
Whitepaw nodded. "That makes sense. Who's your mentor? Mine's Brackenfur."
"Mine's Leopardstar!" Hawkpaw puffed out his chest. Whitepaw felt a pang of jealousy. He was really going to be someone.
She pushed her envy away and purred. "Congratulations. I hear that's a big honor."
Hawkpaw grinned. "Yup! Don't worry, though, I'm sure you'll be a great warrior."
Whitepaw hoped he mean what he said. "You, too," she meowed. "A good fighter, especially."
Hawkpaw leaned closer. "I'm hoping to become leader one day," he murmured in her ear.
Whitepaw smiled. This sure was one determined young cat! "Pay attention in your training, and you just might get to be deputy," she advised.
"I sure hope so," Hawkpaw sighed.
Blackstar let out a yowl from the great rock, silencing the watching cats. It was time for the meeting to start.
Whitepaw padded over to Sorrelpaw and settled down next to her. She felt an odd sensation run through her as Hawkpaw followed her and parked himself beside her, his dark tabby pelt just barely touching hers.
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Battle yowls rang out across the rocks, and claws flashed in the early morning sunlight. Blood splashed out onto the sandy riverbank, and the fighting cats' fur was stained crimson. Whitepaw unsheathed her claws, ready to defend her territory. A troublemaking Riverclan patrol had gone just a smidge too far into their territory, and the border skirmish was very heated.
'Trying to claim Sunningrocks again!' she thought with a hiss. The white apprentice slunk into the undergrowth, preparing to set up an ambush. The unsuspecting warrior was wrestling with Thornclaw, trying to pin him to the ground. Whitepaw crouched behind him in the shadows, calculating the distance between her and Heavystep's back.
As she turned to back up, blue eyes flashed in the shadows behind her. 'Reedpaw!' Whitepaw spun around, arching her back and flexing her claws. She was ready for a fight.
As the cat sprang out of the bush, her fur bristled with recognition. The newcomer wasn't Reedpaw, it was Hawkpaw! Embarrassment overtook his handsome features as he realized who he was attacking, and he backed up slowly, his fur hot.
"I'm…sorry," he stammered. "I didn't recognize you over there."
"It's a border skirmish!" she hissed. "Aren't you going to attack me?"
To her surprise, the brawny apprentice shook his head. "It's not a fair fight," he replied. "I have better things to do than pick on puny little apprentices who can't defend themselves."
Whitepaw bristled, though she was more relieved than annoyed. She didn't like the idea of fighting any cat with muscles that big.
"I wouldn't want to hurt a scrap like you," Hawkpaw taunted. "You don't deserve it."
With that, Hawkpaw turned away and rushed down the slope, flinging himself onto Shrewpaw. Whitepaw watched him go, puzzled. Though Hawkpaw's words were meant to mock her, it seemed to her that a cat like Hawkpaw would rather beat up a tiny apprentice than hurt her with words. As mean as Hawkpaw's statement had been, he had seemed to favor her at least over Shrewpaw. 'But why?'
Whitepaw focused back on her ambush. She turned to see Heavystep was gone, and in his place was Reedpaw, fighting Spiderpaw. Unsheathing her claws, Whitepaw rushed out to defend her clanmate.
As she ran, Whitepaw still couldn't help but feel a pang of awkwardness. Hawkpaw hadn't attacked her…why hadn't he? Surely he didn't see anything special about an undersize white apprentice?
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Comments: 55
Bramblestar27 In reply to ??? [2013-01-11 05:03:11 +0000 UTC]
So glad you like it! Lawl this story's almost 2 years old now. And of course! Deviantart could certainly use more WhitexHawk fanart! No need to ask my permission lol
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-14 03:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Me too, Cloudfire, me too <3 Fav evil couple!
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VANlLLA In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-15 23:20:32 +0000 UTC]
I have some whitexhawk stuff I've been working on... I'll upload it ASAP!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-16 04:31:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you sososososo much, I am totally hyped to see it! Are you drawing any specific scenes from the fanfiction or just them being all lovey?
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VANlLLA In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-17 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]
i drew just a random scene from the story where they're on the island and hawkfrost's got his tail wrapped around whitewing... <333
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-19 02:30:58 +0000 UTC]
D'AWWWWW! Thank you so much for doing this for me HawkxWhite forevar!
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VANlLLA In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-19 18:07:53 +0000 UTC]
I'll be doing more soon too... Whitexhawk RULES
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-19 22:30:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm really flattered that someone likes my fanfiction enough to draw fanart of it <3 specially since the more WhitexHawk fanart there is, the better WhitexHawk youtube videos I can make
Thanks again!
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VANlLLA In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-19 23:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! They're just so fun to read about and draw! And now I want to see your videos!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-20 02:12:19 +0000 UTC]
Kewl, my username's BramblexFeatherFan. My HawkxWhite videos aren't very impressive though...the first one's kind of old and crappy, the second one's kind of a spoof, and the third one's real short.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to VANlLLA [2013-01-20 04:19:50 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! There are some other HawkxWhite viddies on youtube too, which makes me happy
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Crystal09812 [2012-02-25 23:39:40 +0000 UTC]
Hey :3 its crystal09812,your stalker from youtube..I LOVE YOU
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Bramblestar27 In reply to Crystal09812 [2012-02-25 23:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Hiiiiii Crystal! I'm so glad I finally have a stalker! :'D My life is complete
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Bramblestar27 In reply to zestia240 [2011-12-04 18:58:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanx! Young love is beast!
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CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-02 20:27:01 +0000 UTC]
I love this story! I may not support most of the couples and Hwk x White itself. (Hardcore Hawk x Ivy fan!) I will still love this story!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-02 21:14:15 +0000 UTC]
I think later on in the story you'll find out why i don't support Ivyxhawk (:< Thanx about the storeh! I worked rly hard on this thing, i'm glad ppl wanna read it IK it's about WhitexHawk, but there are lots of subplots, so u can focus on those.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-02 21:17:37 +0000 UTC]
I already knew that you didn't support Ivy x Hawk so I already knew that it was going to be White x Hawk. I know you better than you think! (Creepy isn't it. Evil laugh! Ahem.) Don't you think that it's funny how we can get along so well when we have such opposing views? But it does make our conversations more interesting.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-03 00:31:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes, u know me very well >X3 Odd how we can have long conversations when we only support like 4 of the same pairings...maybe it's because neither of us like trolling. You know, fearlessly telling other people their couples suck and that they suck because thye like them.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-03 00:32:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I don't want people hatin on my couples so I don't go hatin on their couples.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-03 03:13:24 +0000 UTC]
Good policy to have! I'm sure you could rant for hours on some of my favorite pairings, but u don't cuz ur nice Maybe that's why we get along so well...some people comment on my stuff just to tell me they hate the couple and i'm like "):< Don't comment then!"
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-03 12:46:37 +0000 UTC]
I can rant about any couple I love or hate and I also love to read rants about couples I always found yours interesting because like me you back them up with facts. I can also find some facts for couples like Raven x Violet. I also believe that it is better to have friends than enemies so I prefer to be nice.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-03 20:05:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, my couple susually have at least SOME evidence...well, not evidence neccesarily, but facts about both cats that would make them go well together. RavenxViloet would be an interesting pairing, even tho the only proof seems to be in the manga, when Ravenpaw said, "Violet is impressive. She's so brave, and positive!"
Gotta agree with u there. Usually, if i make enemies, it's because they start a fight by telling me my couple sucks, and of course, i have to defend myself.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-03 22:39:16 +0000 UTC]
That's sorta what made me fall in love with Raven x Violet. And your right I will be mean if I have to defend myself against a jerk who is bashing on me just because I like something they don't. I mean read my signature for proof!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-03 22:43:40 +0000 UTC]
Gotta hate those bashers! I always kick their butts if they attempt to kick mine!
Oh ya, ur siggie...u copied mine
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-03 22:57:21 +0000 UTC]
It's because your siggie is awesome sauce!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-03 23:21:19 +0000 UTC]
Yah, i got fed up with all the horrid couples in warriors, so i decided to speak out against them in my siggynature >:3 i have to agree with you about LeafxSharp...Billystorm is kind of a fail, since he's still pretty much a kittypet.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-04 02:08:22 +0000 UTC]
Well I still like Leaf x Billy and Gray x Silver but just not as much as I like Gray x Millie and Leaf x Sharp.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-04 17:50:56 +0000 UTC]
I don't really like GrayxMillie, since Millie annoys me. LeafxBilly is pretty cute, but...all the daylight warriors bother me to some extent. Having Sharpclaw as a mate might cause Leafstar to follow the warriro code more and not change it as much.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-04 18:55:28 +0000 UTC]
I think Millie only annoyed me during the time when Briarlight was hurt, but I think I can relate because I have a mother like her too.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-04 22:35:41 +0000 UTC]
yah, she basically treats Briarlight like a baby and doesn't trust Jayfeather to take care of her. Although Briar never says so, you can tell it annoys her. Also...Millie didn't take a clan name. That really bugs me.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-04 22:36:53 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking in my version of Warriors she later on takes a clan name along with Daisy and they are named Silverpool and Daisyfrost.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-05 17:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Silverpool and Daisyfrost are awesome names!!! Maybe it'd be better if Millie's name didn't start with "Silver" since that would be too much like Silverstream. Maybe Mintleaf, although Silverpool is prettier, i admit.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-05 17:25:18 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking that maybe Siverstream and Millie meet each other in dreams and that Millie can see her in real life and that Silverstream is like Millie's best friend and sort of a guardian angel of sorts towards her. I think that she would also want to honor Graystripe's old mate by taking a similar name.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-05 21:43:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, as long as Millie knows about Silverstream, i guess it would be okay. I always wondered if Millie and Silver met up...after all, Sand and Spotted did, as did Leaf and Feather.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-05 21:51:43 +0000 UTC]
I always thought that too.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-06 16:35:28 +0000 UTC]
they most likely did, at some point. i wonder what they said...? hmmm...
i seem to remeber when Millie was sick with greencough in Long Shadows, Silverstream was like "Graystripe doesn't deserve to have his heart broken twice" and then she helped heal Millie...i think.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-06 16:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! That's where I got that idea from.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-07 00:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, she didn't seem too jealous there. Or maybe she was just worried that Millie would die first, and then it would be a mess when Graystripe came to Starclan or not. Then i think Jayfeather told Gray about Silver and Graystripe was like, "It's so like Silvertsresm to care," so i guess he thinks she really was worried about Millie.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-07 02:41:49 +0000 UTC]
She might have been. She's not like Spottedleaf who wouldn't really care about Sandstorm just as long as Firestar is happy.
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-09 18:26:00 +0000 UTC]
yeah, when Spottedleaf gave him his life in the nine lives thing, she was like, "use it for Sandstorm!" Funny all these she-cats who die and their lover takes another mate...they all have the same attitude! It's always, "Ya, go right ahead, take another mate! I'll be happy for you!" I mean, it'd be good if at least ONE was pissed! I know i would be!
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-09 20:29:36 +0000 UTC]
I think Spottedleaf was only doing that to hide her feelings I think she was going to claw his and Sandstorm's ears off!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-09 21:38:10 +0000 UTC]
Lol, i would have watched and laughed Go Spottedleaf! IDK, I get why Feathertail was understanding about Crowfeather to Leafpool, but If i were Honeyfern, i would ahve freaking MURDERED Berrynose for blowing me off so soon after i died!
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-10 01:40:06 +0000 UTC]
Go Sand, Leaf, and Honey! I have nothing against Feather or Spotted but Poppy can die in a hole!
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-10 21:14:29 +0000 UTC]
I'm tean Spottedleaf, but okay. CrowxLeaf is adorable! I will always love that pairing, even though i love CrowxFeather as well. BERRYXHONEY FTW! I've always liked Poppy, but...her and Berrynose suck together. they don't work AT ALL. I bet she's using him to get Jayfeather Jealous, but it doesn't seem to be working X(
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Bramblestar27 In reply to CosmosTheKitsune [2011-07-11 02:46:16 +0000 UTC]
I always suspected Poppy liked Jay, but it would be a one-sided love since he's a medicine cat and doesn't want to end up like his mum.
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CosmosTheKitsune In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-07-11 15:05:56 +0000 UTC]
I think she did too but he's too epic for her.
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