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BrianAW — Wonder Woman versus Grodd 1

Published: 2010-05-06 03:43:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3474; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 90
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Description A pin-up for the Wonder Woman Day comic art auction, a charity based in Chicago and NY that supports shelters for abused women.
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mechangel2002 [2010-05-09 21:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous pencils Just watch her waist and backside a little, it seems like the back of her waist is too high (a little more shading needed lower behind her).

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BrianAW In reply to mechangel2002 [2010-05-09 22:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Aggh! When you're right, you're right
It's funny how when you look at your own stuff you can't see the obvious sometimes. Thanks.
She was a little heavy in the thigh, too. I've taken another pass at it.

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mechangel2002 In reply to BrianAW [2010-05-09 22:49:40 +0000 UTC]

I totally get that with my stuff too LOL... I draw arms too short XD I'm really good at editing for other artists though. I'd move the curve of her back outwards a little too (beef up her ribcage) to balance her muscularity.

Maybe indent the curve under her thigh gently to show the progression from her buttock to the thigh?

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