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dont like painting sailsthe rest was fun though!
hope you like
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Sciencegeek123 [2011-03-18 22:20:52 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Hello! Hopefully I can write an effective critique for you. I'm fairly new at this, so I'm terribly sorry if I seem overly critical or rude, it is not my intention. I believe in bringing every little detail to surface, so that it can help you in the best way possible. First however, I'd like to say that this is an epic and awesome work of art. (One that is making me consider if I rate things too loosely.)
Vision:
I gave you a 5 in the category of vision. To me, the image portrays not only a theme of, but also a feeling of solidarity. In other words, it makes me feel small, and I think that is what your objective is. Otherwise, it is fantastically Sci-Fi, and I spent quite a lot of time examining the image in the background.
Originality:
I gave you a 4.5 in the category of originality. The only reason I didn't give you a 5 is because of how common these landscape type works are in Sci-Fi. Overall the work is unique, and deserves recognition as such.
Technique:
I gave you a 5.0 in the category of technique. It is a well constructed and designed image, and your use of colors, value and location is excellent. The construction in the background is particularly interesting, and well made. I wish I could offer further information here, but I think this is an excellent piece.
Impact:
I gave you a 5.0 in the category of Impact. Right from the onset, the feeling of smallness and awe overtook me. It is a beautiful image in its own right, and will certainly leave a lasting impression. The pair of people complete the image, by tying in a human element and applying a scale.
Overall:
Overall this is an excellent image, and without being extremely critical, it is hard to find fault. I hope you found my critique useful.
-Sciencegeek
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L1GHTN1NG [2011-01-28 15:08:06 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of Trasformers (when they discovered megatron)
Awesome job.
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bloknayrb [2011-01-27 15:23:59 +0000 UTC]
This is totally awesome. The sails do kind of look like they're facing the wrong way, but they're also not so noticeable in general so no big deal
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Smiling-Demon [2011-01-26 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]
looks great, love the sense of scale. We gonna see a Lum piece from you?
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Broken-Lithium In reply to Smiling-Demon [2011-01-27 01:03:34 +0000 UTC]
cheers yeah, sorry ive been rather inactive, have had lots of work to do for applying to universities and whatnot so this is the only piece ive had a chance to squeeze out but now that the biggest deadline is over for glasgow ill be sure to make something for the pack!
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Broken-Lithium In reply to c-p-v [2011-01-28 17:16:56 +0000 UTC]
little people make everything epic thanks
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c-p-v In reply to Broken-Lithium [2011-01-28 22:35:42 +0000 UTC]
I agree wholeheartedly with the above statement.
Not that I'm just over 5ft or anything.
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