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Published: 2008-04-07 02:06:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1173; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 15
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Description I WIN. HAHA JK. I really like her body. It's like my body.

CRITIQUE ME.

This is different from the me Toki o.o There are two Toki. Sorry >.>
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Comments: 42

rain-endless [2008-08-09 06:26:43 +0000 UTC]

explain to me the difference between elite toki and regular toki?
(and also why are your facebook pics labeled "toki" sometimes?)

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comic-burn [2008-04-11 00:26:10 +0000 UTC]

I love it. Not much critique I can offer. You have a good understanding of body kinetics. She's so cute.

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brokenaoshi In reply to comic-burn [2008-04-12 18:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks <3 I do like bodies a whole lot...

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pathetictastic [2008-04-09 22:22:32 +0000 UTC]

I realllllly like these. When are you gonna make that hat for yourself, ehhh? The middle on the middle one is very nice.

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brokenaoshi In reply to pathetictastic [2008-04-09 22:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Grin grin ^o^ I'll make the hat when ever I can make hats...

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pathetictastic In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-04-09 23:16:36 +0000 UTC]

D:< NOW

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brokenaoshi In reply to pathetictastic [2008-04-10 00:16:46 +0000 UTC]

;__; I wish.

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ChrisDayo [2008-04-09 03:15:41 +0000 UTC]

I think you've done a great job
Everything looks really good.
bravo.
Gah I hope I can enter this contest as well
but I do think you should win.
I'm very impressed. your character design is amazing

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brokenaoshi In reply to ChrisDayo [2008-04-09 14:40:22 +0000 UTC]

O.O * ultra blush *

Well... thanks alot ^.^;; It's not that good, but I really am um... * giggle * so happy that my design is somewhat well liked... <3

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ChrisDayo In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-04-09 18:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha your very welcome. & I think it's to die for

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brokenaoshi In reply to ChrisDayo [2008-04-10 00:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Hehehhh!! ^__^ * pounce *

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AliyaBaba [2008-04-08 07:34:24 +0000 UTC]

really nice design!!

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brokenaoshi In reply to AliyaBaba [2008-04-08 16:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! ^-^

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artisticpsyco [2008-04-08 05:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Heehe, this is so cute. I hope you become one of the finalists ^^

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brokenaoshi In reply to artisticpsyco [2008-04-08 05:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you!! ^-^ * snuggle!! *

Support from random people makes me feel as good as winning >w< I'm just glad the contest inspired me to draw something so fun :3

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aquadolphin [2008-04-08 00:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow! her outfits are so cute! I love the skirt ^^
*doesn't stand a chance* @_@

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brokenaoshi In reply to aquadolphin [2008-04-08 01:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww ;-; * cuddles * It's okay! I don't stand a chance either, but it's still fun to try! ^-^

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kgiax [2008-04-07 17:01:48 +0000 UTC]

NOW THIS IS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT!

Good job A++++ stuff. =3

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brokenaoshi In reply to kgiax [2008-04-07 17:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Yey!! * dancing arounds and things *

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GIFH [2008-04-07 09:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, I LOVE the outfits. Especially the amazing hat. It is an amazing hat indeed.

I'd like to give some helpful critique but unfortunately my skills are poo compared to yours. ;_; I'll give it a shot, but feel free to disregard any of it since I don't have a good grasp on stuff.

So the one thing I was able to notice is in the 2nd full-body sketch her body gets a little too thin as it goes into the chest area. Here's a little edit:[link] (please excuse the terrible lining. >> )

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brokenaoshi In reply to GIFH [2008-04-07 14:59:51 +0000 UTC]

^o^ Thanks! I actually noticed that when I was inking it for practice o.o When I was drawing it I was like "NO ONE WILL CARE. I AM DRAWING IN THE CAR. RAAAWRRG." Because I'm always angry when I draw in the car o.o; Not really. Tee hee...

I really like the hat too!! 0.0 I've wanted one for years!!

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GIFH In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-04-08 03:31:49 +0000 UTC]

LOL @ the RAAAWRRG. You really drew this in the car? My car drawings always turn out all funky. *jealous*

And you should so totally make that hat. And wear it around and be all cool.

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brokenaoshi In reply to GIFH [2008-04-08 16:21:45 +0000 UTC]

Well I only really drew at stop lights and stuff xD

I would wear that hat around *__* at all times. I have my other 'toki hat' the only that is sort of my trade mark, but I left it on the bus ;-; So I has to remake that one...

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Mickeygr [2008-04-07 06:45:02 +0000 UTC]

I like the Lolita feel of these sketches. Take them further...hehehe...

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brokenaoshi In reply to Mickeygr [2008-04-07 06:58:44 +0000 UTC]

>3> Maybe some other time!! Silly...

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PlanetSal [2008-04-07 05:38:56 +0000 UTC]

the outfit is really well designed!
I luff it! *^*v

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brokenaoshi In reply to PlanetSal [2008-04-07 06:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Fwuuu *-* Thank you!! * dance *

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rottel [2008-04-07 05:31:44 +0000 UTC]

The outfits scream Harajuku, Japan. I'm interested in seeing how far you can push the 'creative clutter'.

Nice stuff !

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brokenaoshi In reply to rottel [2008-04-07 06:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Aah xD Thats about how far it goes for me... thats sort of how I dress most days.

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FullDeathGhostFool [2008-04-07 03:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Woah! That one in the top left has all kids of coolio zippers and belts and whatnot on her jacket! Totally keep this one, she/you rock hardcore style!

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brokenaoshi In reply to FullDeathGhostFool [2008-04-07 06:58:25 +0000 UTC]

The one on the left is her with the jacket, the one on the right is just without xD lolol

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TAHOpaints [2008-04-07 03:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Your poses and outfits are getting more and more detailed!

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brokenaoshi In reply to TAHOpaints [2008-04-07 06:57:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm workin' on it! >w< * dance * Sorry about taking so long on the payment btw... promise I'll do it soon xD

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TAHOpaints In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-04-07 07:17:31 +0000 UTC]

lol no rush at all

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thewhantahndestroyer [2008-04-07 03:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Ohreally?

I just made up another two toki, and they each have two toki's so now there's six.

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brokenaoshi In reply to thewhantahndestroyer [2008-04-07 07:01:27 +0000 UTC]

o.o;

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operaplay [2008-04-07 03:14:33 +0000 UTC]

good job

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brokenaoshi In reply to operaplay [2008-04-07 07:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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spinnytwirl [2008-04-07 02:51:17 +0000 UTC]

these sketches are awesome
i really love looking at this stuff..

hmmm hmm advanced critique? well i cant say anything since they're sketches and they leave a nice hole allowing for mistakes.

i cant catch any right now since they seem very conceptual =]

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brokenaoshi In reply to spinnytwirl [2008-04-07 07:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, they aren't VERY conceptual ^ ^;; My sketching isn't usually very different from my drawing...

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spinnytwirl In reply to brokenaoshi [2008-04-07 10:40:17 +0000 UTC]

well sketches are generally conceptual xD
its an idea isnt it? ;D

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brokenaoshi In reply to spinnytwirl [2008-04-07 15:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Well yis o-o But they're still on calibre with my not-sketch drawing xD

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