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Description I am not crying because I lost him,
I am crying because I lost me.

I have given up,
tears dripping like burning wax down my cheeks
and into the candle.

It's dark, now:
I've said goodbye.

[I cannot hold on any longer.]
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Comments: 25

ErinM31 [2013-10-30 05:13:46 +0000 UTC]

I really love this piece
Featured in my journal: fav.me/d6sbzip

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ErinM31 [2013-10-31 04:08:03 +0000 UTC]

oh, goodness! I'm so honored. thank you<3

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ErinM31 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-31 04:28:17 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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littlemoonboots [2013-10-20 14:48:45 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful poem. simple yet packs a punch and i just love the way it flows entirely...

i hope everything's all right. :c <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to littlemoonboots [2013-10-31 04:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm okay, angel. Making my way.

Thank you so much!
I MISS YOU WOW HOW ARE YOU?!?! <3

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nosedivve [2013-10-14 19:23:46 +0000 UTC]

This poem is so powerful and I love it entirely. The words you use are always perfectly, carefully chosen and it's so simplistically intricate. I love it. 


Please, if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for you. 24/7.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to nosedivve [2013-10-31 04:04:21 +0000 UTC]

DVTW&YOUHIEJLKNMS<
oh, you.

Thank you so much, muffin. I appreciate it<3

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nosedivve In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-31 21:37:58 +0000 UTC]



you are most welcome!!

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the-solimnludic [2013-10-11 19:12:01 +0000 UTC]

You're beautiful.. your writing is beautiful,
honestly, I can't even say anything about this perfection.
Don't apologize for this.

My love and thoughts for you, Angela, as always.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2013-10-31 04:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh, goodness! Thank you kindly.

I appreciate this. (:

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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-11-08 22:30:40 +0000 UTC]

Welcome, welcome, you're always welcome.

C:

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overtsexualized [2013-10-11 04:00:01 +0000 UTC]

hugshugshugs!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to overtsexualized [2013-10-31 04:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling<3

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MsGeekNerd [2013-10-11 01:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Are you ok? Do you need someone to talk to? I know this isn't goodbye "in the way you think it is" but if I might ask, from what? You don't have to answer.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to MsGeekNerd [2013-10-11 02:07:18 +0000 UTC]

I just had to let a part of myself go.

Don't worry, angel. I'm fine. Thank you.

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MsGeekNerd In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-12 01:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok.... But if you're ever not fine just know that there are loads of people who care.

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ieatrosepetals [2013-10-11 00:38:16 +0000 UTC]

is this a real goodbye..?

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ieatrosepetals [2013-10-11 00:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Not in the sense you think.

Not here, or life. Don't worry.

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ieatrosepetals In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-11 00:40:12 +0000 UTC]

i just don't want to see you go. i hope you're okay, sweetie.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ieatrosepetals [2013-10-11 00:40:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm here, don't worry.

Thank you, darling. (:

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ieatrosepetals In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-11 00:42:25 +0000 UTC]

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ithaswhatitisnt [2013-10-11 00:31:06 +0000 UTC]

NO

NONONONONONONONONONO


I LOVE YOU

HANG ON

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ithaswhatitisnt [2013-10-11 00:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, apologies.

I'm hanging on. Don't worry.

This isn't a goodbye in a sense you'd think. Don't worry.

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ithaswhatitisnt In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-10-11 00:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay.  


I kind of thought that was the case, but my mind jumped immediately to something else. Sorry.


I still love you, though. <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ithaswhatitisnt [2013-10-11 00:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Don't be sorry! It's quite alright, dear.

You too angel c:

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