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here is a love storyin quiet words:
she pressed her hands to my heart
and her palms came away
dusty.
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here . Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by 
Keep writing and keep creating.
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Ah! I'm so, so honored! Thank you so much, I'll make sure to check everyone out <3
Thank you! x
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WHYYYY WHYYYYY....
You have everything when it comes to talent.
Honestly I wish I could buy a journal with your little poems written on every page...
(I'm just curious, what does the dust symbolize to you as the author?)
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Oh! Thank you so much, oh my goodness, I'm????
I'M SO HONORED
NO ONE'S EVER SAID THAT TO ME BEFORE OH MY GOODNESS
I don't know if I'd ever publish something--I'm too nervous to. I think I would really like to, though.
(The dust symbolizes that there's nothing really there. Just dust. Just debris.
Something might have been there, once, but there's nothing but remnants, now.
It isn't too noticeable, but it's what I meant with the discription of
"I have nothing. I'm sorry."
At the bottom 
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Oh, come here, you!
I honestly cannot believe that.
It's true!
I see...I'd be nervous, too. If I had your writing abilities I wouldn't be too nervous, though. c: Well, it's a good thought. If you ever do, let me know, and I'll be sure to buy it.
(We have a Literary Magazine at my school, that's the only place I've been "published" in.)
(Gotcha.
It reminded me of the "and to the dust you will return" in the Bible.)
OH AND HSLJHDFJDSGCONGRATS ON YOUR DLD!! SO HAPPY FOR YOU... this piece was definitely DLD material, hon.
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LITERALLY! No one's ever said they'd want to buy my work, goodness!
or even read it for free omg
so it means so much fehorwjlknmasd
I will let you know! I've always...kind of wanted to? But idk man I just??? SCARED
(I had the opportunity but I was too nervous to even put it in a school magazine lol)
THANK YOU SO MUCH I APPRECIATE IT FIUKNWM
Gosh!!
Haha...well, why do you think I read it for free whenever I see it in my inbox? I get eager every time I see a new deviation from you!
Right! Haha! It's okay!
(Did they ever have the option of putting you as "Anonymous"? That's what we do...yeah, I'm part of the Lit Mag crew, haha!)
YOU'RE SO WELCOME!!
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I DON'T KNOW FOEYIHLWJKD
thank you so much omfg that means a lot im??? WEEPING
THANK YOU <3
(and they did
but I was still nervous
idk LOL)
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(:
And now I've got a bunch more to read from you! Yay! Going to get cozy and sit down and read them soon. Gosh if I had a cup of hotΒ cocoa to go along with it that would just be perfect.
You've probably noticed I don't look at them right away (sorry!) I let them stack up and then binge heh okay bad word usage but still
(Gotcha..it's ok!)
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AW! Haha, THAT MEANS SO MUCH GOSH YOU'RE ACTUALLY SUCH A COMPLETE CUTIE FRICK
thank you so much! They're really not much, but I hope you like them anyway!
(AND HEY OH NO DONT BE SORRY AT ALL! I'm honored you even look at them. Time doesn't matter!)
HAHA, binge reading. I like it! C:
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Haha you're hilarious!! Cx Psshh!
It's my pleasure! I'm sure I'll love them as always!!
(GOSH THANK YOU! Thank you for understanding! And it's truly an honor to read them. Thanks again!)
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I wanted to say something I've noticed. Many people ask if you're alright because what you write is sad. That happens to me too. Only, people don't seem to understand that I don't write sad things because I'm depressed. I write sad things because I find writing about happiness a bit boring and hard to pull off. Plus, I can be dramatically tragic when writing sad things. I like it. But anyone who reads my work thinks I'm emo or something. That's why I don't post it online. I don't know, I would be grateful that people cared enough to ask but I would get a bit annoyed from tine to time. Maybe That's just me.
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I do not get annoyed, honestly--
it's very touching that people care. It...I'm not used to it.
I write my heart.
If it's sad, then...well.
It seems that I am sad.
But I am also alright, if that makes sense.
I am living and breathing and making it through the day,
so I must be somewhat
alright.
I am not annoyed. It's very kind.
I don't always know how to react for I never really got asked about how I felt before. That's about it.
But I see where one might get annoyed.
Regardless, I'm glad you like the poetry you write, sad or not. (:
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I just get annoyed because lots of people read my poetry and act as though I'm not ALLOWED to write something sad... Or serious.... Some people act as though I should be writing about the goldfish I had in third grade or the time I went to Disney Land and I threw up on the roller coaster just because I'm young. It pisses me off. I do feel happy that people care here. Just not in my life offline.
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You do have talent. Do realize how very difficult it is to get this level of emotion in such a short piece? You did it! How have you been, by the way?
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aw, goodness. This means a lot, honestly--thank you so much.
I'm alright. Surviving, I s'pose.
How're you? (:
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Pretty much the same here.
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This is beautiful. You have talent, and an amazing ability to put wonder into words. Just remember that.
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Oh, goodness! Thank you so much, muffin. This was quite lovely to read (:
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You deserved it!
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Sweetheart, please message me if you need to talk... I hope you're doing okay. This is beautiful and so are you. I hope you find some sunshine soon, though.
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I don't need to talk, thank you darling.
I'm doing alright, no worries!
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Okay. Just making sure.
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What're you talking about? Β This is lovely...sad and lovely. <3
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I have a problem with emotions.
It's not that I don't feel them. I just prefer to act on nothing.
I'm not sure if I'm able to do relationships, or things like that.
This is just sort of a representation.
(:
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