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Description my lungs used to have
a surplus of air
when you came around
as if i could never
get the chance
to exhale

now my throat is
stitched shut,
lungs closed tightly
whenever i hear your name
as if i've lost
the ability
to inhale
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Comments: 6

the-solimnludic [2013-12-13 23:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! The two contrasting stanzas--even their last lines are the exact opposite. Gosh, I love that!
Strong sense of emotion, too. I always love the feeling I get when you describe things like this; it makes me feel at a loss for breath, too.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2013-12-16 05:40:42 +0000 UTC]

EEP I LOVE YOU
Thank you so much!

Your words always make me smile I???? GAH
thank you. <3

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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2014-01-03 01:32:59 +0000 UTC]

LOVE YOU TOO ^^

You're more than welcome! It's my pleasure!

Aw haha! That's so great to hear! Really...I'm so glad. I hope you know my words are genuine. <3

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Alyssa00045 [2013-12-12 08:01:22 +0000 UTC]

It's nice, I like it.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Alyssa00045 [2013-12-16 05:40:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad! Thank you!

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Alyssa00045 In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-12-16 05:45:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

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