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brokenfragilethings — I DON'T BLAME HER
Published: 2016-08-31 04:23:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 417; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description I WANT HER TO / KISS THE HEART RIGHT OUT OF ME /
PLUCK IT FROM MY THROAT / CRADLE IT IN HER HANDS

SHE'LL KEEP IT SAFE / UNTIL THE INEVITABLE RETURN /
DROPPED ON MY / DOORSTEP / THE NOTE WILL READ :

I'M SORRY / IT WAS TOO HEAVY TO HOLD
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Comments: 14

L3Spark [2017-03-09 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]

That last line made me cringe because i can relate to it so much...it also reminds me of Florence + the machine "I'm so heavy in your arms" song

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brokenfragilethings In reply to L3Spark [2017-05-04 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]

i love florence, but i'm unfamiliar with that song! i'll give it a listen.

thank you!

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L3Spark In reply to brokenfragilethings [2017-05-06 10:32:12 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome (:

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pansydiv [2017-03-06 15:20:07 +0000 UTC]

I think the title is the punchline here.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to pansydiv [2017-05-04 02:57:25 +0000 UTC]

:')

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RJBG [2016-08-31 16:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant work!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to RJBG [2016-08-31 17:04:45 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate that! Thank you!

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RJBG In reply to brokenfragilethings [2016-08-31 17:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome! Great read! ( :

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DarkFaerieNyroc13 [2016-08-31 14:34:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so powerful. Well done!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to DarkFaerieNyroc13 [2016-08-31 17:04:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy to hear that. Thank you!

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Muerte23 [2016-08-31 12:46:08 +0000 UTC]

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Muerte23 [2016-08-31 17:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PoetsHand [2016-08-31 04:34:34 +0000 UTC]

This is such a powerful piece. I can only say that it speaks volumes in such little space.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to PoetsHand [2016-08-31 17:04:19 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate that! 
I thought it was a little weak, so I'm glad to hear you think otherwise!

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