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I WANT HER TO / KISS THE HEART RIGHT OUT OF ME /PLUCK IT FROM MY THROAT / CRADLE IT IN HER HANDS
SHE'LL KEEP IT SAFE / UNTIL THE INEVITABLE RETURN /
DROPPED ON MY / DOORSTEP / THE NOTE WILL READ :
I'M SORRY / IT WAS TOO HEAVY TO HOLD
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Comments: 14
L3Spark [2017-03-09 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]
That last line made me cringe because i can relate to it so much...it also reminds me of Florence + the machine "I'm so heavy in your arms" song
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brokenfragilethings In reply to L3Spark [2017-05-04 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]
i love florence, but i'm unfamiliar with that song! i'll give it a listen.
thank you!
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L3Spark In reply to brokenfragilethings [2017-05-06 10:32:12 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome (:
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brokenfragilethings In reply to RJBG [2016-08-31 17:04:45 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate that! Thank you!
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RJBG In reply to brokenfragilethings [2016-08-31 17:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome! Great read! ( :
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brokenfragilethings In reply to DarkFaerieNyroc13 [2016-08-31 17:04:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm so happy to hear that. Thank you!
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PoetsHand [2016-08-31 04:34:34 +0000 UTC]
This is such a powerful piece. I can only say that it speaks volumes in such little space.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to PoetsHand [2016-08-31 17:04:19 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate that!
I thought it was a little weak, so I'm glad to hear you think otherwise!
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