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She aches for something--"Maybe tomorrow."
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I get it. She's a dreamer yet she never makes the effort to start working toward what she wants, to fill the ache.
This is lovely. I don't know about the word "something", though. Maybe something just slightly more specific would make a perfect word. I like the title, the format, and how you italicized the last part. Six words, but a lot of emphasis.
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I like your interpretation! (:
Thank you, though! Yeah, I didn't know of a one-word that could fit, though. I couldn't think of one :c I'm, at least, a little satisfied that it fits alright, though.
Thank you! I really appreciate this <3
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Thank you!!
I couldn't think of anything either. Well, you're the author, so that's alright! C: You're welcomee!
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I always wonder how much I could do with my days if I didn't keep saying "maybe tomorrow."
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Hahaha! I feel you. That wasn't the intent behind this, but that definitely happens to me, too. I'm a pro procrastinator LOL
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It makes sense to me and here's why -
1) the title: that plus the content makes a ton of sense because in my mind this is what is happening (a girl feels terrible and says to herself that maybe tomorrow will be better)
2) disregarding the title: a girl fills unfullfilled and thinks that sleeping it off until the next day would make it go away.
Those are my interpretations. 
The brevity of these six words are astonishing and breathtaking. I don't understand how you can't see this - you're a legend waiting to happen.
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Ah, thank you so much!
I'm really glad a meaning was able to be pulled out, with or without the title! My biggest fear was that it was just going to be a handful of words without meaning.
But I'm glad a meaning was tugged across, nonetheless. That really pleases me.
Thank you for taking the time to let me know, honestly! I appreciate your words, like, all the time<3
My meaning was a little personal, really. (As is, as you know, most of my work, since it's written based on how I'm feeling.)
She's aching for something more, some feeling, almost--almost aching to stop aching, if you know what I mean.
The 'maybe tomorrow' happens because she says it every day, despite knowing it's not going to happen.
Maybe tomorrow has become a term of almost defeat, really.
It's supposed to sound defeated.
Of course, I can't get that completely through in 6 words, which is why I love seeing other interpretations C: And yours were quite close, honestly!
Oh, wow--what a lovely compliment. I'm speechless fguoshdjkfn,mc
I'm glad the piece hit you. (':
And thank you! WOW DIYGEHJKNS
/SQUEEZES
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Ah I'm really glad! Thanks :'D
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It makes total sense. This is how i feel with writing! I ache to write, filled with inspiration… open the text document… and then go on tumblr or some other site. And then I don't end up writing at all
And then I usually end up really wanting to write just as I go to bed…
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Thank you so much for your interpretation! :'D
I love hearing what people got out of or felt from my words. It really means a lot.
But I feel you, haha. Aching to write wasn't my intent of the words, but I'm glad it was yours! I like writing things that people can feel, as well.
Hahaha, I know what you mean! 3 am rolls around and I'm ready to write a novel.
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No problem. I love poetry that makes you think.
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The first thing I thought of is the aching for love. That probably just stems from my own feelings, though.
Either way, I really love this. Love the impact.
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For me, it's an ache. Just an ache. For something more.
Don't know what, really.
But! I like that since it's so not-detailed, people can feel their own things to it. I like hearing that people do.
So thank you for this! And your lovely words. <3
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Aah, I see. Interesting.
Ha, yeah. Poetry open to interpretation is always cool.
My pleasure, I've been trying to leave good feedback for my favorite writers.
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Aw wow! That's so kind of you to say!! >.<
Thank you, babe<3
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You're very welcome. <3
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This makes perfect sense. 
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I'm glad! There's no abstract wording, not really, but I thought it could be a little...nonsensical, in a way. But I'm glad it makes sense!
Thank you so much babe<3
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No problem, sweetie!
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