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brokenfragilethings β€” The drapes are orange
Published: 2013-04-10 04:12:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 1
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Description I don't want to write about
the way you used to smile at me or
the easy slope of your body
pressed against mine.

These aren't just words on how you
broke my heart,
I get enough of those
floating through my body on
lonely nights.

I don't think I can take
remembering your stupid laugh or
the beauty mark behind
your left knee.

There was a cafe at the airport
last weekend, and it had
your favorite drink and I cried
into the stupid cup
and it didn't make anything better.

I reach for you when I'm yawning,
sunlight streaming through the window because
you had to get those fucking
too-small curtains and,
and,

and now you're not even here
to deal with your stupid drapery,
and I don't want to say that I miss you
but I miss you.
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Comments: 14

Maralissa1993 [2018-09-24 01:12:16 +0000 UTC]

wow thats so beautiful so im thinking about typing my own poetry but i could not do it because i will be pissed off if someone steal my own poetry as my own writings without my permission >< i typed my poetry about my hearing loss when Β i was 14 years old.Β 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Maralissa1993 [2018-09-24 01:55:40 +0000 UTC]

i'm sure your poetry is beautiful ! i understand the fear of not wanting it stolen. i always worry mine will be as well. its understandable ! i'd be very upset if someone took my work, too.

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citrinenote [2013-04-14 12:10:53 +0000 UTC]

ahh you're amazing. i love this <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to citrinenote [2013-04-17 18:39:40 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE THE AMAZING ONE OMG

Thank you so much babe I LOVE YOU. <3

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Maclafel7 [2013-04-12 22:15:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is so amazingly perfect…

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Maclafel7 [2013-04-13 03:11:06 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate this greatly, thank you so much!

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Sar-girl [2013-04-10 18:03:31 +0000 UTC]

As always, beautiful stuff.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Sar-girl [2013-04-11 22:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, babe. I appreciate it! x

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ieatrosepetals [2013-04-10 12:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Well.
It's different than what I've been used to reading from you.
It all follows the same undercurrent but this one was written differently.
A good sort of different, if it wasn't already obvious to you. xD
I love it.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ieatrosepetals [2013-04-11 22:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just wrote it a bit more straight forward or something. Or maybe not, even--I'm not sure. It just feels like something different, I don't normally write quite like this.

But thank you dearie C:
I appreciate it.

AND I LOVE YOU. x

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ieatrosepetals In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-04-12 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!
AND I LOVE YOU TOO.

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ithaswhatitisnt [2013-04-10 04:22:32 +0000 UTC]

I think it's still as good as your other pieces.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ithaswhatitisnt [2013-04-10 04:25:32 +0000 UTC]

(': I really appreciate that, babe. That's really lovely of you to say.
Thank you. <3

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ithaswhatitisnt In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-04-10 04:51:19 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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