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Published: 2014-05-09 16:51:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 378; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Let nothingdrag your demons;
they are part of you.
nicotine inside patches
kisses your knuckles
with bloody lips—-
you will always end up here
& people start looking
for exits when hope
stops returning
to souls that
imagine time passing
again.
Comments: 5
Vayne-Locke [2015-07-11 04:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Ha! That's cool that you did that for your exam I really like this though. I can relate to this especially the first part where the demons are a part of us. We all have our own demons and we constantly fight with them. Sometimes they win and sometimes lose. It's all a part of being human. Very lovely writing though, I enjoyed reading it
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brokenfragilethings In reply to Vayne-Locke [2015-07-11 04:14:09 +0000 UTC]
yeah! i got to memorize it as a poem, so when the exam came, i remembered which words to use for the fill in section
it was a really fun way to write a poem, since i got to keep the creativity, but also made it useful, or something.
thank you very kindly for your comment! i'm really glad you enjoyed it
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Vayne-Locke In reply to brokenfragilethings [2015-07-11 04:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Hey, you gotta do what you gotta do right!? Anyway it's an awesome poem and I'm glad you shared it!
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brokenfragilethings In reply to Vayne-Locke [2015-07-11 04:24:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you again!!!
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