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brokenfragilethings — bleed me a melody
Published: 2013-05-26 05:09:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 305; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description when i think about you
all i taste is sadness.
it pushes up my throat like bile,
until heartache bubbles at my lips
and pours out of my mouth like sorrow.
i guess i've got rhythm
'cause i hum every time i'm blue.
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Comments: 13

nosedivve [2013-05-26 16:02:27 +0000 UTC]

"until heartache bubbles at my lips"

wow, that right there is an amazing line.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to nosedivve [2013-06-06 06:13:26 +0000 UTC]

aw wow!! your stuff is always so fantastic! this means a lot babe thanks <3

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Cibian [2013-05-26 14:26:40 +0000 UTC]

It takes time. Just keep moving forward and it'll get easier.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Cibian [2013-06-06 06:15:17 +0000 UTC]

I hope (: Thank you!

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Cibian In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-06-06 13:27:34 +0000 UTC]

It will! ^^ And your welcoem =3

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Who-I-am-xxx [2013-05-26 14:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Esaier to say you have to move on then to actually move on...
Beautifully written though!!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Who-I-am-xxx [2013-06-06 06:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I know. Believe me (':

Thank you kindly xx

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Who-I-am-xxx In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-06-06 22:20:41 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling too <3
you're very welcome xx

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SebastianGrimm [2013-05-26 13:17:39 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to SebastianGrimm [2013-06-06 06:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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SebastianGrimm In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-06-06 20:17:33 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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ghearradh [2013-05-26 06:05:13 +0000 UTC]

wonderful and powerful imagery here!

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ghearradh [2013-06-06 06:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you kindly darling! x
I appreciate it!

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