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Published: 2017-07-25 09:09:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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do you remember what it was like, being honey - holy?god's favorite angel,
cherry mouth still with the
pit
and raspberry juice stained fingers.
mango juice stained
chin,
still sticky. still wet. red palms peel back the flesh
another bite another bite a
nother
bite
dipped in saccharinity
honey - holy mango mouth, you suck sugar for 25 cents
still sticky. still wet.
when is enough enough
is enough enough ?
now you are just saccharine - sweet teeth falling from your mouth
like black licorice,
r o t t i n g
from the outside in
saying
i started off as somethin' beautiful, darlin', and look at me now
look at me now
Comments: 10
legitimately in awe omg your writing is LOVELY ♡♡♡♡
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i feel this everywhere. thank you for bringing this ache to life.
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what a painfully raw comment. thank you for making me feel something too. gosh. <3
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Always welcome. Hope all is well.
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things are okay on this end for the most part! always something, but. nothing too bad.
same wishes for you!
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This is lovely -- beautifully written. Sometimes intricate formatting distracts me; here, it works really well and adds to the piece. Really well done!
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thank you so much; as always, your comments are so lovely to see.
formatting it was something i was nervous about! because the same happens to me.
but i had it in a standard layout, and for some reason i really wasn't feeling it?
so i tried to do a minimal but !!! impactful, hopefully, sort of break-up of lines and words.
thank you. i'm so glad it adds to the piece. <3
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