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Published: 2013-07-16 07:20:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description i just wanted to be
your number one
but i'm stuck in
second place

and i want you
to be happy
but is it so wrong
that i want
to be happy, too?
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brokenfragilethings - gangrene

brokenfragilethings - 01.
Comments: 14

32bees [2013-07-17 12:30:01 +0000 UTC]

I can relate exactly to the second stanza right now. Β My guy "friend" is just being a huge ass to me and my best friend, and we didn't even do anything :c

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brokenfragilethings In reply to 32bees [2013-07-18 02:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww, dove :C I'm so sorry.

That's an awful feeling \:

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32bees In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-07-18 03:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Β He said he's done with us... Well, I'm done with him. Β I've cut because of him too many times. Β 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to 32bees [2013-07-20 07:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Is that so? \:
I'm so, so sorry. Self harm is awful and difficult and I've been through it, still struggling. So I understand.

But you can't let him control your body like that anymore, as hard as it may be. You /should/ be done with him, you deserve better. Hang in there. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm around. <3

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ghearradh [2013-07-17 00:56:57 +0000 UTC]

i love how simple this is, yet it is still very powerful. wonderful poem.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to ghearradh [2013-07-18 02:06:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow! Thank you so much. Your work is so fabulous, so it always means a lot when you have something to say about mine. I appreciate this! <3

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ghearradh In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-07-18 21:04:38 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, sweetheart.


aw, you're too kind!

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spotted-fawn [2013-07-16 17:07:53 +0000 UTC]

no no don't delete this! i like it a lot. if it's any consolation, i know how this feels. excellent job, though.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to spotted-fawn [2013-07-18 02:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Aw shucks frgushdjfn THANK YOU SO MUCH! (':

I appreciate it c:

And ugh, it's not a good feeling. I'm sorry you know how it feels, darling :c


Thank you though<3

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spotted-fawn In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-07-18 18:07:25 +0000 UTC]

ah no problem c:

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quenjamin [2013-07-16 15:40:14 +0000 UTC]

I like this, but I'd like it more expanded a little, I think. As it is, it's very simple but it gets your point across.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to quenjamin [2013-07-18 02:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Thank you. (: A lot of my work seems to be short and simple or ridiculously ramble-y, haha.

But I'll keep it in mind! I'm not sure if I'm going to expand it, simply because I'm out of the mindset I was in when I wrote this. Like, I was really feeling the idea. And now I'm like, boop, can't do it. I'll definitely keep it in mind, though, if I ever feel like coming back C:

Thank you though! <3

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nosedivve [2013-07-16 07:30:23 +0000 UTC]

to be completely honest, i wasn't too interested in the poem because it's definitely such a familiar topic/saying, but those last two lines really made the poem wonderful. it was just so powerful.Β 


give me your talents woman. Β 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to nosedivve [2013-07-18 02:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I understand. Sometimes I like to take over-used or said things and put my own spin on them, though. Just because, they're actually really interesting topics to write about. I figure there must be something about them that makes people want to use it--so I give it a shot.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though! The ending, at least C:


BAH SSHHH YOU'RE SO TALENTED CVEGIYHSKJBND

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