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Published: 2017-07-25 09:46:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 346; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description say, i found faith
in the taste of her honeysuckle skin,

and i was never one for worship
but a holy war blossoms inside me, here

my body's once hollow church now hallow'd,
a beloved religion stirring in my breast

say, a feeling this good
has to be holy
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Comments: 6

pansydiv [2017-07-28 19:49:09 +0000 UTC]

my first response is oh.  
britt's right though- this is very soft. and gentle and delicate and somehow so inherently powerful and captivating and yeah i think i'm gonna start crying if i read this again

i love this

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brokenfragilethings In reply to pansydiv [2017-07-29 02:18:32 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh, please don't cry ! thank you so much for the kind words;
i'm so happy you like this piece. it's been a while since i've really
sat down and like ? done something. so my recent pieces were a little nervewracking to publish !

i'm glad you enjoyed this.

thank you ! <3

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T2Q [2017-07-25 19:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice; subject matter's tightly-woven and concise. 

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brokenfragilethings In reply to T2Q [2017-07-25 19:40:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! i really appreciate that. 💖

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angelserum [2017-07-25 19:07:20 +0000 UTC]

i'm crying, i'm so glad to see more beautiful poetry from you.
this is enchanting in its beauty <3 so soft and delicate and gorgeous, makes me soft

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brokenfragilethings In reply to angelserum [2017-07-25 19:40:38 +0000 UTC]

AWWW you are so cute ! you are the cutest.

thank you infinitely for liking my work. i am always so genuinely floored it's enjoyed.
hearing your response made me smile. thank you so, so much! 

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