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Published: 2015-07-23 14:07:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 751; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Description this house eats you, sucks
the flesh from your bones
then uses them for broth.

this house inhales the soul
from in between your ribs,
leaves you

hollowed,
turns you into one of its
hallways

( welcome home )
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Comments: 6

nilescclover [2016-12-26 14:24:08 +0000 UTC]

that was horrible........as in scary way of looking at a house that way,

great job! very emotional,

I loved it!        

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brokenfragilethings In reply to nilescclover [2017-01-20 21:18:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you! the imagery was supposed to be quiet horrifying. happy it was portrayed.

thanks again, have a lovely day!

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VenetianCloud [2016-09-29 08:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Very accurate. Very...cold.

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brokenfragilethings In reply to VenetianCloud [2016-09-29 22:13:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you! that was the intent happy it came across!

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Pianocanival [2016-01-22 17:17:01 +0000 UTC]

I love it ! <3

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brokenfragilethings In reply to Pianocanival [2016-03-11 16:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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