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Published: 2013-07-29 09:59:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 508; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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the worst iswhen you're broken
and your body just keeps
trying to put you back
together again
and there are shards
of your heart
where your tongue should be
they catch at your cheeks
and leave your chest hollow
but somehow still manage to bleed
and there's soul
dripping from your fingertips
like an IV
feeding the empty veins of all that you touch
until you've withered into
nothing but paper skin and splintery bones
the worst is when
your mind already knows
you're defected
but the rest of you
can't seem to catch up.
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Comments: 11
the-solimnludic [2013-08-08 16:31:05 +0000 UTC]
This seems to me, more than your other pieces, like it should be sung.
I think the beginning of the second stanza was my favorite.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to the-solimnludic [2013-08-12 04:05:49 +0000 UTC]
Sung O: interesting! I like to make melodies. I'll keep this in mind
C:
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the-solimnludic In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-08-12 17:52:22 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yeah! Awesome, then. C:
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brokenfragilethings In reply to chromeantennae [2013-08-06 00:25:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much c:
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chromeantennae In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-08-06 00:26:47 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure.
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half-pixieman [2013-08-02 11:36:32 +0000 UTC]
and there's soul
dripping from your fingertips
like an IV
Holy crap that is epic
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brokenfragilethings In reply to half-pixieman [2013-08-03 20:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it c:
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spotted-fawn [2013-07-30 01:46:07 +0000 UTC]
ahh, this is really perfect. really powerful and emotional.
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brokenfragilethings In reply to spotted-fawn [2013-07-31 07:31:16 +0000 UTC]
YOU'RE A CUTIE
Thank you. I appreciate it c:
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spotted-fawn In reply to brokenfragilethings [2013-07-31 18:48:38 +0000 UTC]
aw shucks (/u\)
no problem! c:
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